Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)

Skill Name: Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)
Skill Type: Sword Style | close range (0-5 meters)
Skill Information: Allows the user to use the sword Blood for offence to pierce or break level 1 armor and defense
Skill Strengths:
- The sword blood can pierce lv. 1 armor with ease
- Can block enemy attacks if endurance is 10 higher than enemy's strength
- Add a small plus 5 endurance to the user stays active as long as sword is unsheathed
Skill Weaknesses:
- The sword blood weighs the user down decreasing the user's speed by 5 when unsheathed.
- It cannot cut through or into flesh due to the fact that the blade is dull
- Abilities can be canceled out by Kenbunshoku Haki users, they can easily dodge and counter the attacks

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Sasu (Blood Stab)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee|close range (3 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Blood stab allows the user to stab the opponent quickly 2 times
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-It pierces level 1 armor
-Sends level 1 ranking enemies back 3 feet if user's strength is 10 higher than enemy's endurance
-Makes the user's speed go up by 10 only while using this abilty
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Enemies with 5 more reflex than the user's speed can defend or counter this
-After using this ability, successful or not, the user's speed will drop by 10 for 2 posts
-Enemies with 10 more endurance than user's attack or enemies with the zoan fruit ability 'hide' can deflect or ignore this ability

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Barikēdo (Blood Barricade)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defense | Close range (0-3 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to stab the sword blood in the ground and defend against oncoming attacks
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Endurance goes up by a small 5 points
- Blocks attacks from level 1 weapons
- Enemies need 10 strength more than user's endurance to break the endurance
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- User has no movement and can be attacked from behind
- Cannot defend against Busoshoku Haki attacks
- If attacked from behind the ability will be stopped immediatly

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kekkyū Keisū-Ki (Blood Counter)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-3 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: This ability allows the user to block and counter enemy attacks by holding the sword blood in a diagonal direction
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Can block attacks if user's endurance is the same or higher than enemy's strength
-Can counter attacks if user's reflex is higher that enemy's speed
- reflex goes up by 5
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-If enemy's reflex is higher that the user's reflex the enemy may counter the user's counter
-User can't block against Logia fruit attacks
-User cannot hurt enemies with higher endurance than user's reflex

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Pondo (Blood Pound)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-5 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to jump in the air and slam the sword Blood onto the ground
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-It can make level 1 rank enemies up to 5 meters away fall
- User's strength increases by 5
- Ability may potentially crack the ground (If it's dirt) causing enemies 0-1 meter away to get one foot stuck in the ground
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Speed deceases by 10 for 3 posts
- Tires the user out forcing them to stay in place
- Doesn't affect enemies with 10 endurance higher than the user's attack

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Hakku (Blood Hack)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to rush at an enemy and bring the sword Blood down onto the enemy
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Strength is increased by 5
- Pierces through level 1 armor
- Speed is increased by 5
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Endurance drops by 5  
- Reflex drops by 5
- Cannot hurt zoan fruit users with the ability 'hide' and cannot pierce through level 1 armor if enemy's endurance is higher than user's strength

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Mystic340 wrote:Skill Name: Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)
Skill Type: Sword Style | close range (0-5 meters)
Skill Information: Allows the user to use the sword Blood for offence to pierce or break level 1 armor and defense
Skill Strengths:
- The sword blood can pierce lv. 1 armor with ease
- All enemies need 10 more defense than user's strength to block skill -to block every skill? Sounds more like a weakness. So please change it to a solid strength.
- Add a small plus 5 defense to the user [colo=#ff0000]-Please change defense to endurance. And will this buff stay active whenever the sword is unsheathed? [/color]
Skill Weaknesses:
- The sword blood weighs the user down decreasing the user's speed by 5 when unsheathed.
- It cannot cut through or into flesh due to the fact that the blade is dull
- Abilities can be canceled out by Haki users -since everybody is able to use Haki, be more specific about the sort of Haki and how is can cancel the abilities.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Sasu (Blood Stab)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee|close range (3 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Blood stab allows the user to stab the opponent quickly 2 times
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-It pierces level 1 armor
-Sends low ranking enemies back a few feet -How many feet? How low must the enemy be? Does the enemy endurance have a roll in this?
-Makes the user's speed go up by 10 only while using this abilty
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Enemies with 5 more reflex than the user's attack can defend or counter this -5 more reflex than the user's speed makes more sense since this attack relies more on the speed of the user and not the attack.
-After using this ability, successful or not, the user's speed will drop by 10 -For how long will the drop last?
-Enemies with 10 more defense than user's attack or enemies with the zoan fruit ability 'hide' can deflect or ignore this ability -please change defense to endurance.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Barikēdo (Blood Barricade)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defense | Close range (0-3 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to stab the sword blood in the ground and defend against oncoming attacks
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Defence goes up by a small 5 points -Please change defense to endurance.
- Blocks attacks from level 1 weapons
- Enemies need 10 strength more than user's defense to break the defense please change defense to endurance.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- User has no movement and can be attacked from behind
- Cannot defend against Haki attacks -Which kind of Haki?
- If attacked from behind the ability will be stopped immediatly

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kekkyū Keisū-Ki (Blood Counter)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-3 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: This ability allows the user to block and counter enemy attacks by holding the sword blood in a diagonal direction
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Can block attacks if user's defense is the same or higher than enemy's strength -Please change defense to endurance.
-Can counter attacks if user's reflex is higher that enemy's speed
- reflex goes up by 5
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-If enemy's reflex is higher that the user's reflex the enemy may counter the user's counter
-User can't block against Logia fruit attacks
-User cannot hurt enemies with higher defense than user's reflex -Please change defense to endurance.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Pondo (Blood Pound)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-5 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to jump in the air and slam the sword Blood onto the ground
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-It can make low ranking enemies up to 5 meters away fall -how low ranking?
- User's strength increases by 5
- Ability may potentially crack the ground (If it's dirt) causing enemies o-1 meter away to get one foot stuck in the ground
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Speed deceases by 10 -For how long?
- Tires the user out forcing them to stay in place
- Doesn't affect enemies with 10 endurance higher than the user's attack

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Hakku (Blood Hack)
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to rush at an enemy and bring the sword Blood down onto the enemy
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Strength is increased by 5
- Pierces through level 1 armor
- Speed is increased by 5
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Endurance drops by 5  
- Defense drops by 5 -this is not a stat we are currently using. The endurance stat is also a sort of defense stat. I suggest changing this to reflex.
- Cannot hurt zoan fruit users with the ability 'hide' and cannot pierce through level 1 armor if enemy's defense is higher than user's attack -Defense=endurance and attack=strength.

P.S. Pro-tip. If you want to make this look more slick and nice, you can look at one of my skills and see bow I did the lay-out with the colors etc. The links are in my signature. This is not needed but makes it a little more pretty looking.

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