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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
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    Miyata's Skill and Abilities

    Miyata
    Miyata


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Conqueror's Haki

    Beli Beli : 6001
    Posts : 20
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : N/A
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Miyata Yanarou
    Primary Skill: Diamond Devil Fruit
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Miyata Tue Apr 08, 2014 10:10 pm

    Skill Name: Naiya Naiya no Mi (Diamond Devil Fruit)
    Skill Type: Paramecia
    Skill Information: (Not much is mentioned in the canon so I'm just going to make it up if that's fine) The fruit is similar to that of an apple in appearance yet light-blue with dark-blue swirls all over. The fruit grants the user the ability to turn him/herself into solid hard diamond protecting them from immediate damage. The users arms can then become craft-able tools (i.e. user makes his hands like sharp blades). The diamond body doesn't impair movement of the user much although the weight can slow him/her down. In addition to this the Diamond body can be strenuous to an individual with low strength, durability will also effect the devil fruit's usability when blocking attacks. Quick Note: The Diamond Miyata creates is very distinguishable from other precious Diamonds, meaning it cannot be used as currency. Unless the person he's purchasing from has absolutely no idea what a diamond looks like.

    Skill Strengths:
    - Endurance increase (10 Points)
    - Strength increase (5 Points)
    - Craft-able limbs

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Speed decrease (10 Points)
    - General (Earth Element) Devil Fruit weaknesses: (Drowning, Sea-salt, Haki, Light)
    - Strenuous (An Additional 1 Post to the cooldown of every skill is added after every 5 posts used in battle)

    Level 1 Skills:


    Last edited by Miyata on Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:37 am; edited 2 times in total
    Miyata
    Miyata


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Conqueror's Haki

    Beli Beli : 6001
    Posts : 20
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : N/A
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Miyata Yanarou
    Primary Skill: Diamond Devil Fruit
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Miyata Fri Apr 11, 2014 8:38 pm

    Finished.
    Miyata
    Miyata


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Conqueror's Haki

    Beli Beli : 6001
    Posts : 20
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : N/A
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Miyata Yanarou
    Primary Skill: Diamond Devil Fruit
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Miyata Wed Apr 16, 2014 6:31 pm

    Just curious is this currently under revision? If not then. . .Bump :]
    Phoenix D. Jack
    Phoenix D. Jack


    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Yonko- Captain- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Logia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Legacy of a Legend

    Beli Beli : 584647
    Posts : 414
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Gallant Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Phoenix D. Jack
    Primary Skill: Mera Mera No Mi
    Secondary Skill: Rokushiki: Soru and Rankyaku

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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Sat Apr 19, 2014 4:13 pm

    Corrections in red

    I was going through you profile step by step when realising it was pretty much every strength and weakness that was the problem, be more specific and write more detailed a one word weakness does not cut it, you have to explain what the weakness does.


    Miyata wrote:Skill Name: Naiya Naiya no Mi (Diamond Devil Fruit)
    Skill Type: Logia <--- its a paramecia
    Skill Information: (Not much is mentioned in the canon so I'm just going to make it up if that's fine) The fruit is similar to that of an apple in appearance yet light-blue with dark-blue swirls all over. The fruit grants the user the ability to turn him/herself into solid hard diamond protecting them from immediate damage. The users arms can then become craft-able tools (i.e. user makes his hands like sharp blades). The diamond body doesn't impair movement of the user much although the weight can slow him/her down. In addition to this the Diamond body can be strenuous to an individual with low strength, durability will also effect the devil fruit's usability when blocking attacks. Quick Note: The Diamond Miyata creates is very distinguishable from other precious Diamonds, meaning it cannot be used as currency. Unless the person he's purchasing from has absolutely no idea what a diamond looks like.

    Skill Strengths:
    - Defence increase <--- How Much
    - Strength increase <--- How much
    - Craft-able limbs

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Speed decrease <-- how much?
    - General Devil Fruit weaknesses <--- be more specific
    - Strenuous <--- how so?

    Level 1 Skills:
    Miyata
    Miyata


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Conqueror's Haki

    Beli Beli : 6001
    Posts : 20
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : N/A
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Miyata Yanarou
    Primary Skill: Diamond Devil Fruit
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Miyata Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:40 am

    I've added more specific affects to the Devil Fruit's Strengths and Weaknesses. It should suffice, if not then I'll add more alterations and detail

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