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    GhostOfTerrell devil fruit primary skill

    GhostOfTerrell
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    Post by GhostOfTerrell Thu Jan 16, 2014 7:13 pm

    Skill Name:flower style  ( petal petal no Mi)
    Skill Type:paramecia
    Skill Information:the petal petal fruit allows the user to create flower petal to aid him and battle the flowers can be any kind it also can become as hard as steel or as soft as a feather and it can make prison  or medical herbs the user also can makes the flower petal appear
    Skill Strengths:
    -it can create shields
    -it can move very fast like at the most 7-mph at lvl 1, 15-mph at lvl 2, 25-mph at lvl 3
    -it can change different flower petals to make poison or medical herbs he can also put  them on daggers and swords
    -if the user can create a flower petal boat out of water based flower petals such as lily pads
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -Skill user loose -10 Endurance against fire base opponents.
    -strong wind can blow away the petals
    -ice can freeze the petals
    -Sea water, and sea stone
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower dance
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close range 0-10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell ready his self as for every time he  moves sunflower petal comes out which can be hard as steal or soft as a feather.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -there are so many flower petal it will make it hard to see Terrell moves -
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger  
    -somebody that has better skills such as wind or ice can stop the petals

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:distraction strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:flower petal floats around the target in order for Terrell to get a cheap shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals distracts the target for at least 1 post-
    -if not careful the target can get hurt to the point that it felt as if he or she was stab with a dagger
    -its also makes for a great escape plan

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target uses fire based moves
    -the target see the cheap shot with 10+more reflex than Terrell they can move out the way in time
    -the target can counter the cheap shot but only if the target speed are better than the users by +10 .________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:long range 16-25 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell make rose petals hard like steel then throws it at the target
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals are like daggers getting throw at you
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the flower petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger
    -if the target runs behind a wall the flower petals can't break threw it it will break a chip off at the most

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    Ability Lvl 1 Name:sun flower strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close range 0-10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes sun flower petal form a line to the target then rushes at him with full force
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Terrell pics up speed to stab the target. Gain +5 speed.
    -Terrell can hit 2 to 3 NPC with this but only one real player
    -the strike could be fatal to the point that he can injure a organ such as the heart which could lead to death- the death part is only for NPC any real player will get hurt

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -the strike is pretty straight forward so the target can easily move out the way,
    -the target blocks the strike if he or she reflex is 10 plus more than Terrell
    -the target takes the strike head on using a fire,ice,wind attack to counter it
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:petal shield
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes roses flower petal form around him then turns them hard like steel to make a shield it can also turn into a ball like to form around him

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the shield is hard to break, skill user gains +5 endurance"
    -the shield can turn soft which in turns allow Terrell to leave though the back side  fooling the target into thinking he is still in there Terrell can makes his escape
    -Terrell can ready himself for the next attack by the target

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -ice or any other damaging type devil fruit with 10 plus strength can freeze the shield either way Terrell leaves it by force to not take damage  
    -Terrell can't see the target for its really dark inside the shield but he can hear them
    -the target can pick up the shield if he or she endure and or strength is 10+ more then Terrell's
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    Last edited by GhostOfTerrell on Wed Mar 19, 2014 11:07 am; edited 59 times in total
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    GhostOfTerrell devil fruit primary skill Empty Re: GhostOfTerrell devil fruit primary skill

    Post by Azure Snow Wed Jan 22, 2014 6:32 pm

    Fix The things that i have done in Red.


    GhostOfTerrell wrote:Skill Name:flower style two blade chaos ( petal petal no Mi)-First of all, you CANT have a Devilfruit AND a Sword style for your Primary skill. it needs to be the Petal-Petal Fruit OR a Sword style. you can have a devilfruit as your primary and then a sword style as your secondary.
    Skill Type:paramecia (melee) The skill Type would be Devilfruit.
    Skill Information:the petal petal fruit allows the user to create flower petal to aid him and battle the flowers can be any kind it also can become as hard as steel or as soft as a feather and it can make prison or medical herbs
    Skill Strengths:
    -it can create shields
    -it can move very fast (How Fast?)
    -it can change different flower petals to make prison or medical herbs

    Skill Weaknesses:
    -any fire based move can do major damage
    -wind can blow away the petals such as tornadoes (I would say strong winds)
    -ice can freeze the petals
    -also the sea water and any thing related to that (Sea stone, sea salt, and sea water)

    Until you change up your techniques with actual Devilfruit Techniques and not sword skills i will not check the rest of this app. Bump when you have made this App a Devilfruit Skill or a Sword Skill.

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower dance
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia ( weapon master)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell ready his blades as for every time he swings them flower petal comes out which can be hard as still or soft as a feather.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -there are so many flower petal it will make it hard to see Terrell moves -
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -wind can blow the flow petals away if they are soft
    -somebody that has better skills then Terrell at sword play

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:distraction strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia (melee)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:flower petal floats around the target in order for Terrell to get a cheap shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals distracts the target -
    -if not careful the target can get hurt really bad
    -its also makes for a great escape plan

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target uses fire based moves
    -the target see the cheap shot
    -the target can counter the cheap shot
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:29 slashes and 1 dagger
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:weapon master (melee)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell slashes at the target 28 times and the target gets distracted by the blades he or she do not see the dagger strike

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -although the blades our meant to do harm it doesn't really matter for its the dager thats the real kill move
    - the dager is the cheap shot is prison
    -the 29 slashes are deadly as well

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target blocks every slash even the dagger
    -the target notice the dagger and backs away
    -the target has devil fruit powers that allow little to no damage by melee attacks
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:sun flower strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia (melee)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:7 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes sun flower petal form a line to the target then rushes at him with full force
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Terrell picks up speed to stab the target
    -if the target is not stronger then him
    -the strike could be fatal

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -the strike is pretty straight forward so the target can easily move out the way,
    -the target blocks the strike
    -the target takes the strike head on uses a more powerful attack
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:petal shield
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 8 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes roses flower petal form around him then turns then hard like steel to make a shield

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the shield is hard to break  
    -can move around like a ball
    -Terrell can plan his next move or makes his escape

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -fire base moves can do damage although it will take a little move time since the flower petals our hard
    -Terrell can't do nothing in the ball but think
    -the target can pick up the shield if he or she is strong to do it
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    Post by GhostOfTerrell Sat Mar 08, 2014 4:28 am

    ok i did it check it out now 0.o
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    Post by Leon L.H. Sun Mar 09, 2014 8:16 am

    GhostOfTerrell wrote:Skill Name:flower style  ( petal petal no Mi)
    Skill Type:paramecia
    Skill Information:the petal petal fruit allows the user to create flower petal to aid him and battle the flowers can be any kind it also can become as hard as steel or as soft as a feather and it can make prison  or medical herbs
    Skill Strengths:
    -it can create shields
    -it can move very fast like at the most 25 mph
    -it can change different flower petals to make prison or medical herbs - add poison.
    -if the user can create a flower petal boat out of water based flower petals such as lily pads
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -any fire based move can do major damage
    -strong wind can blow away the petals
    -ice can freeze the petals
    -also the sea water sea stone and sea powder can weaken it to the point of it being useless
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower dance
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell ready his self as for every time he  moves sunflower petal comes out which can be hard as steal or soft as a feather.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -there are so many flower petal it will make it hard to see Terrell moves -
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger so a much better dagger or sword can block it also a shield of a higher level can to reword it to the petals are no stronger than lvl 1 dagger.
    -somebody that has better skills such as wind or ice can stop the petals

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:distraction strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:flower petal floats around the target in order for Terrell to get a cheap shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals distracts the target for at least 1 post-
    -if not careful the target can get hurt to the point that it felt as if he or she was stab with a dagger
    -its also makes for a great escape plan

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target uses fire based moves
    -the target see the cheap shot with 10+more reflex than Terrell they can move out the way in time
    -the target can counter the cheap shot but only if the target reflex are better than the users 7 to 10+ -- i didn't see this until now, take out the 7,,, just 10+
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:medical petal
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell make petals from a medical type plant then mix it with his medicine or eats it to heal himself a little

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - the petal helps terrell to heal - reword this to, it helps Terrell to heal small wounds, such as little cuts or small bruises, small nose bleed and such.
    - terrell can also put the plant on a open wound to ease the pain and or stop the bleeding - how is this different than first one? first one strength will cover this. make new one.
    -terrell can give other the plants to heal as well

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -terrell can't just use the plant he have the know can he eat it or apply it - not a applicable weakness, as having high intel (stat) will determine this. Without high enough intel, you won't know which one to eat anyways.
    -opponents can easy (easily) stop him from using the petal to heal
    -the petal can have a side effect that could be bad for terrell - what kind of side effect?

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:sun flower strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes sun flower petal form a line to the target then rushes at him with full force
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Terrell pics up speed to stab the target. Gain +5 speed.
    -Terrell can hit 2 to 3 NPC with this but only one real player
    -the strike could be fatal to the point that he can injure a organ such as the heart which could lead to death- the death part is only for NPC any real player will get hurt

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -the strike is pretty straight forward so the target can easily move out the way,
    -the target blocks the strike if he or she reflex is 10 plus more than Terrell
    -the target takes the strike head on using a fire,ice,wind attack to counter it
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:petal shield
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes roses flower petal form around him then turns them hard like steel to make a shield it can also turn into a ball like to form around him

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the shield is hard to break, skill user gains +5 endurance"
    -the shield can turn soft which in turns allow Terrell to leave though the back side  fooling the target into thinking he is still in there Terrell can makes his escape
    -Terrell can ready himself for the next attack by the target

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -ice or any other damaging type devil fruit with 10 plus strength can freeze the shield either way Terrell leaves it by force to not take damage  
    -Terrell can't see the target for its really dark inside the shield but he can hear them
    -the target can pick up the shield if he or she endure and or strength is 10+ more then Terrell's
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    Post by Leon L.H. Tue Mar 11, 2014 7:21 pm

    GhostOfTerrell wrote:Skill Name:flower style  ( petal petal no Mi)
    Skill Type:paramecia
    Skill Information:the petal petal fruit allows the user to create flower petal to aid him and battle the flowers can be any kind it also can become as hard as steel or as soft as a feather and it can make prison  or medical herbs
    Skill Strengths:
    -it can create shields
    -it can move very fast like at the most 25 mph - I know i told you to put this down. but change it to, it can move very fast. at lvl 1 - 7 MPH, lvl 2, 15 MPH and at lvl 3 25 MPH.
    -it can change different flower petals to make poison or medical herbs he can also put  them on daggers and swords - it was mentioned to me that knowing what is medical herb and poison herb, you need to have bit high intelligence. This is my fault for not catching in first place so i do apologize. Don't need to erase it. just keep in mind.
    -if the user can create a flower petal boat out of water based flower petals such as lily pads
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -any fire based move can do major damage
    -strong wind can blow away the petals
    -ice can freeze the petals
    -also the sea water sea stone and sea powder can weaken it to the point of it being useless
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower dance
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell ready his self as for every time he  moves sunflower petal comes out which can be hard as steal or soft as a feather.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -there are so many flower petal it will make it hard to see Terrell moves -
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger  
    -somebody that has better skills such as wind or ice can stop the petals

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:distraction strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:flower petal floats around the target in order for Terrell to get a cheap shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals distracts the target for at least 1 post-
    -if not careful the target can get hurt to the point that it felt as if he or she was stab with a dagger
    -its also makes for a great escape plan

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target uses fire based moves
    -the target see the cheap shot with 10+more reflex than Terrell they can move out the way in time
    -the target can counter the cheap shot but only if the target reflex are better than the users by +10 .________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:medical petal  
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post - put the duration of this ability as 2 posts and Cooldown as 4 posts.
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell make petals from a medical type plant then mix it with his medicine or eats it to heal himself a little to heal deep cuts like 2 inches cuts and 1 petals to head headaches depending on which kind of medical petal he uses it will heal fast like 5 minutes or  less 5 hours or slow like 5 days  - first. we do not use time concept here therefore, take out all the time such as 5 days 5 hours and stuff. Again, "depending on the kind of medical petal you use" ? no you only have one medical herb skill. if you want to have different type of medical herb, write it down under skill strength as sub category.

    For example.

    Ability Strength
    Skill user have three different type of medical herbs.
    - one that can cure small wounds
    - one that can cure small poison wounds.

    and such. OF course if you do this, the weakness needs to be balanced but I will be helping you with that so please think about it. If you do not want to do this way, take out the different type of medical herb. You only got one.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -The petal helps Terrell to heal wounds that are 2 inches dee (deep) depending on which petals he uses to heal him self it can take 5 minutes  5hours or even 5 days ( note it will take one post for wounds that are not all that deadly ) - again we do not use time concept here. just say Terrel can heal wounds that are about 2 inches deep.again,, you only got one type of medical herb unless you mention it.
    -terrell can give other the plants to heal as well  
    -make another strength. you need at least three.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -terrell can't be (add in) an a (take 'a' out) enemy sight or else the target will try to stop him - Like i mentioned, and I will tell you again, take out (...or else the target will try to stop him) take it out. just Terrell can't be in an enemy sight.
    -opponents can easily  stop him from using the petal to heal - change this weakness to It takes two posts to heal the wounds.
    -make another weakness. you need at least 3.

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:sun flower strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes sun flower petal form a line to the target then rushes at him with full force
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Terrell pics up speed to stab the target. Gain +5 speed.
    -Terrell can hit 2 to 3 NPC with this but only one real player
    -the strike could be fatal to the point that he can injure a organ such as the heart which could lead to death- the death part is only for NPC any real player will get hurt

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -the strike is pretty straight forward so the target can easily move out the way,
    -the target blocks the strike if he or she reflex is 10 plus more than Terrell
    -the target takes the strike head on using a fire,ice,wind attack to counter it
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:petal shield
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes roses flower petal form around him then turns them hard like steel to make a shield it can also turn into a ball like to form around him

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the shield is hard to break, skill user gains +5 endurance"
    -the shield can turn soft which in turns allow Terrell to leave though the back side  fooling the target into thinking he is still in there Terrell can makes his escape
    -Terrell can ready himself for the next attack by the target

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -ice or any other damaging type devil fruit with 10 plus strength can freeze the shield either way Terrell leaves it by force to not take damage  
    -Terrell can't see the target for its really dark inside the shield but he can hear them
    -the target can pick up the shield if he or she endure and or strength is 10+ more then Terrell's
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    Post by GhostOfTerrell Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:59 pm

    Bump
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    Post by Leon L.H. Wed Mar 12, 2014 7:15 pm

    I don't think you understand what Bump means. It means that your app is ready to be reviewed again. Do NOT bump it when you didn't even change anything.
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    Post by GhostOfTerrell Mon Mar 17, 2014 1:13 pm

    Bump
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    Post by Leon L.H. Mon Mar 17, 2014 2:50 pm

    Please follow the skill format rule. you need to make 5 abilities. Right now you have 4.
    Another thing. once AGAIN! stop bumping without making the changes. This is considered trolling in a way. This app will not be reviewed until changes are made to the player's skill app.
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    Post by Leon L.H. Tue Mar 18, 2014 4:22 pm

    *MUST READ***** MUST READ*****

    You can only have two types of range. For example, close and mid, or mid and long, or close and long. YOU CAN'T HAVE ALL THREE TYPES OF RANGE. PICK TWO THAT IS SUITABLE FOR YOUR ABILITY.

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    GhostOfTerrell wrote:Skill Name:flower style  ( petal petal no Mi)
    Skill Type:paramecia
    Skill Information:the petal petal fruit allows the user to create flower petal to aid him and battle the flowers can be any kind it also can become as hard as steel or as soft as a feather and it can make prison  or medical herbs the user also can makes the flower petal appear
    Skill Strengths:
    -it can create shields
    -it can move very fast like at the most 7-mph at lvl 1, 15-mph at lvl 2, 25-mph at lvl 3
    -it can change different flower petals to make poison or medical herbs he can also put  them on daggers and swords
    -if the user can create a flower petal boat out of water based flower petals such as lily pads
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -any fire based move can do major damage
    -strong wind can blow away the petals
    -ice can freeze the petals
    -Sea water, and sea stone
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower dance
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia - change it to, either close, mid, or long range.
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell ready his self as for every time he  moves sunflower petal comes out which can be hard as steal or soft as a feather.

    Since your ability type is changed to either close, mid, or long range. Under ability description, state how far it will go. Close range - 0~10 meters, mid range - 11~15 meters, long range - 16~25 meters. I would accept.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -there are so many flower petal it will make it hard to see Terrell moves -
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger  
    -somebody that has better skills such as wind or ice can stop the petals

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:distraction strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia - change it to support.
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:flower petal floats around the target in order for Terrell to get a cheap shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals distracts the target for at least 1 post-
    -if not careful the target can get hurt to the point that it felt as if he or she was stab with a dagger
    -its also makes for a great escape plan

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target uses fire based moves
    -the target see the cheap shot with 10+more reflex than Terrell they can move out the way in time
    -the target can counter the cheap shot but only if the target reflex are better than the users by +10 .________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia - change it to, either close, mid, or long range.
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell make rose petals hard like steel then throws it at the target


    Since your ability type is changed to either close, mid, or long range. Under ability description, state how far it will go. Close range - 0~10 meters, mid range - 11~15 meters, long range - 16~25 meters. I would accept.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals are like daggers getting throw at you
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the flower petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger
    -if the target runs behind a wall the flower petals can't break threw it it will break a chip off at the most

    __
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:sun flower strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia - change it to, either close, mid, or long range.
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes sun flower petal form a line to the target then rushes at him with full force


    Since your ability type is changed to either close, mid, or long range. Under ability description, state how far it will go. Close range - 0~10 meters, mid range - 11~15 meters, long range - 16~25 meters. I would accept.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Terrell pics up speed to stab the target. Gain +5 speed.
    -Terrell can hit 2 to 3 NPC with this but only one real player
    -the strike could be fatal to the point that he can injure a organ such as the heart which could lead to death- the death part is only for NPC any real player will get hurt

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -the strike is pretty straight forward so the target can easily move out the way,
    -the target blocks the strike if he or she reflex is 10 plus more than Terrell
    -the target takes the strike head on using a fire,ice,wind attack to counter it
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:petal shield
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:paramecia - change it to support.
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes roses flower petal form around him then turns them hard like steel to make a shield it can also turn into a ball like to form around him

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the shield is hard to break, skill user gains +5 endurance"
    -the shield can turn soft which in turns allow Terrell to leave though the back side  fooling the target into thinking he is still in there Terrell can makes his escape
    -Terrell can ready himself for the next attack by the target

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -ice or any other damaging type devil fruit with 10 plus strength can freeze the shield either way Terrell leaves it by force to not take damage  
    -Terrell can't see the target for its really dark inside the shield but he can hear them
    -the target can pick up the shield if he or she endure and or strength is 10+ more then Terrell's
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    Post by Leon L.H. Tue Mar 18, 2014 6:08 pm

    Corrections will be in RED. This will be the last one. Make it count

    GhostOfTerrell wrote:Skill Name:flower style  ( petal petal no Mi)
    Skill Type:paramecia
    Skill Information:the petal petal fruit allows the user to create flower petal to aid him and battle the flowers can be any kind it also can become as hard as steel or as soft as a feather and it can make prison  or medical herbs the user also can makes the flower petal appear
    Skill Strengths:
    -it can create shields
    -it can move very fast like at the most 7-mph at lvl 1, 15-mph at lvl 2, 25-mph at lvl 3
    -it can change different flower petals to make poison or medical herbs he can also put  them on daggers and swords
    -if the user can create a flower petal boat out of water based flower petals such as lily pads
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -any fire based move can do major damage - reword this to, Skill user loose -10 Endurance against fire base opponents.
    -strong wind can blow away the petals
    -ice can freeze the petals
    -Sea water, and sea stone
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower dance
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close range 0-10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell ready his self as for every time he  moves sunflower petal comes out which can be hard as steal or soft as a feather.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -there are so many flower petal it will make it hard to see Terrell moves -
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger  
    -somebody that has better skills such as wind or ice can stop the petals

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:distraction strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:flower petal floats around the target in order for Terrell to get a cheap shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals distracts the target for at least 1 post-
    -if not careful the target can get hurt to the point that it felt as if he or she was stab with a dagger
    -its also makes for a great escape plan

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target uses fire based moves
    -the target see the cheap shot with 10+more reflex than Terrell they can move out the way in time
    -the target can counter the cheap shot but only if the target reflex are better than the users by +10 .________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:long range 16-25 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell make rose petals hard like steel then throws it at the target
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals are like daggers getting throw at you
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the flower petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger
    -if the target runs behind a wall the flower petals can't break threw it it will break a chip off at the most

    __
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:sun flower strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close range 0-10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes sun flower petal form a line to the target then rushes at him with full force
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Terrell pics up speed to stab the target. Gain +5 speed.
    -Terrell can hit 2 to 3 NPC with this but only one real player
    -the strike could be fatal to the point that he can injure a organ such as the heart which could lead to death- the death part is only for NPC any real player will get hurt

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -the strike is pretty straight forward so the target can easily move out the way,
    -the target blocks the strike if he or she reflex is 10 plus more than Terrell
    -the target takes the strike head on using a fire,ice,wind attack to counter it
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:petal shield
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes roses flower petal form around him then turns them hard like steel to make a shield it can also turn into a ball like to form around him

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the shield is hard to break, skill user gains +5 endurance"
    -the shield can turn soft which in turns allow Terrell to leave though the back side  fooling the target into thinking he is still in there Terrell can makes his escape
    -Terrell can ready himself for the next attack by the target

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -ice or any other damaging type devil fruit with 10 plus strength can freeze the shield either way Terrell leaves it by force to not take damage  
    -Terrell can't see the target for its really dark inside the shield but he can hear them
    -the target can pick up the shield if he or she endure and or strength is 10+ more then Terrell's
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    Post by Leon L.H. Wed Mar 19, 2014 4:12 pm

    Approved.

    GhostOfTerrell wrote:Skill Name:flower style  ( petal petal no Mi)
    Skill Type:paramecia
    Skill Information:the petal petal fruit allows the user to create flower petal to aid him and battle the flowers can be any kind it also can become as hard as steel or as soft as a feather and it can make prison  or medical herbs the user also can makes the flower petal appear
    Skill Strengths:
    -it can create shields
    -it can move very fast like at the most 7-mph at lvl 1, 15-mph at lvl 2, 25-mph at lvl 3
    -it can change different flower petals to make poison or medical herbs he can also put  them on daggers and swords
    -if the user can create a flower petal boat out of water based flower petals such as lily pads
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -Skill user loose -10 Endurance against fire base opponents.
    -strong wind can blow away the petals
    -ice can freeze the petals
    -Sea water, and sea stone
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower dance
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close range 0-10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell ready his self as for every time he  moves sunflower petal comes out which can be hard as steal or soft as a feather.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -there are so many flower petal it will make it hard to see Terrell moves -
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger  
    -somebody that has better skills such as wind or ice can stop the petals

    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:distraction strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:flower petal floats around the target in order for Terrell to get a cheap shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals distracts the target for at least 1 post-
    -if not careful the target can get hurt to the point that it felt as if he or she was stab with a dagger
    -its also makes for a great escape plan

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -the target uses fire based moves
    -the target see the cheap shot with 10+more reflex than Terrell they can move out the way in time
    -the target can counter the cheap shot but only if the target speed are better than the users by +10 .________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:flower shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:long range 16-25 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:terrell make rose petals hard like steel then throws it at the target
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the flower petals are like daggers getting throw at you
    -the flower petal becomes hard
    -the petal becomes razor sharp

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -any fire based moves will burn the petal -
    -the flower petals are no stronger then a level 1 dagger
    -if the target runs behind a wall the flower petals can't break threw it it will break a chip off at the most

    __
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:sun flower strike
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close range 0-10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes sun flower petal form a line to the target then rushes at him with full force
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Terrell pics up speed to stab the target. Gain +5 speed.
    -Terrell can hit 2 to 3 NPC with this but only one real player
    -the strike could be fatal to the point that he can injure a organ such as the heart which could lead to death- the death part is only for NPC any real player will get hurt

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -the strike is pretty straight forward so the target can easily move out the way,
    -the target blocks the strike if he or she reflex is 10 plus more than Terrell
    -the target takes the strike head on using a fire,ice,wind attack to counter it
    ________________________________________________________________________
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:petal shield
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Terrell makes roses flower petal form around him then turns them hard like steel to make a shield it can also turn into a ball like to form around him

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -the shield is hard to break, skill user gains +5 endurance"
    -the shield can turn soft which in turns allow Terrell to leave though the back side  fooling the target into thinking he is still in there Terrell can makes his escape
    -Terrell can ready himself for the next attack by the target

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -ice or any other damaging type devil fruit with 10 plus strength can freeze the shield either way Terrell leaves it by force to not take damage  
    -Terrell can't see the target for its really dark inside the shield but he can hear them
    -the target can pick up the shield if he or she endure and or strength is 10+ more then Terrell's
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