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    Claire's Primary Skill Kou-Kou no Mi (Fortune Fortune Fruit) [Finished]

    BlackWind:3
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    Character Name: Levy Akatsuki
    Primary Skill: Hie Hie no Mi
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    Post by BlackWind:3 Tue Apr 15, 2014 7:01 pm

    Skill Name:Kou-Kou no Mi

    Skill Type:Paramecia type Devil Fruit

    Skill Information:It's a Devil Fruit that sucks the luck of a person to make the user more lucky.It can also control luck and convert it to energy.It also can change the fate and fortune of the opponent.It's light element.It's devil fruit form is a starfruit with zigzags that patterned with yellow orange and pink in order.All stat changes lasts for the end of the battle and when battle ends,everyone's stat changes turns back to normal.

    Skill Strengths:
    -It can turn the events by changing luck(stats) between herself,ally and the opponent.
    -It can support user's allies.
    -It can drop opponent's 3 finesse stats when user wants.
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -When user activates fruit's passive ability,ally's finesse stats drop by 3 too.
    -Seas,sea stone and sea salt.
    -If same ability used 2 times over and over,it's effects can be reversed.To prevent it,user must wait 1 turn addition before the same move to prevent ability reverse.

    Abilities LVL 1:


    Last edited by BlackWind:3 on Wed May 14, 2014 9:08 pm; edited 12 times in total
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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Tue Apr 29, 2014 2:18 am

    Corrections in Red

    After getting into it I contintue to see the same problems on every post so in general fix the things stated in the ones corrected on all of them.

    Add to all durations of the abilities.

    Add more detail as the wording might seem understandable to you who has the whole idea in your head but to me reading I have a hardtime undersatanding how you want it to work

    You're not allowed a fruit that has both light and darkness choose one or choose neutral

    The whole weakness if used in first or last post the effects are reversedmkaes abselutely nosense especially since its very rare that fighting is starting in the first just as much as it is rare that the last post contains fighting... if anything then it should be in the first post of fighting and the last post of fighting.


    BlackWind:3 wrote:Skill Name:Kou-Kou no Mi

    Skill Type:Paramecia type Devil Fruit

    Skill Information:It's a Devil Fruit that sucks the luck of a person to make the user more lucky.It can also control luck and convert it to energy.It also can change the fate and fortune of the opponent.It's normal element.

    Skill Strengths:
    -It drops user's opponent's 5 finesse stats.<--- as a passive, at all the time? if so thats not happening
    -It can support user's allies.
    -It can suck any 5 stats of opponents.
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -It also drops user's ally's 5 finesse stats.<-- if this is too balance your above mentioned, then its a no go as this is only a weakness while fighting with someone
    -If used for 10 posts,it gives a cooldown for 10 posts.<--- are you saying you're able to extend effects at will?
    -If used in first post or last post of the user,it's effects can be reversed.<-- can be?

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Jinx
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Ranged
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Sends a purple energy wave to lower a random stat of the opponent by 5 and give it to the user.<-- the random factor is impossible in an rp where you're in controll
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It lowers opponent's stats.
    -It increses user's stats.
    -The sucked stats also may be given to the ally.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -If uses in first post or last post,it's effects gets reversed.
    -When given to the ally,the sucked stat from the opponent increases by 1.<-- rewrite as it makes no sense
    -When given to the ally,the same of the sucked stat of user decreases by 1.<--- rewrite as it makes no sense

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Good Karma
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Ranged,Support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:A gold light blesses the ally of the user and increases their a random stat by 5.<-- random is still no random...
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It supports the user's ally.
    -User can suck the stats from the opponent.
    -The given stat's level can change by using it.(1 uses,next use it gives 6 random stat.)<-- so it grows by one for each time used..?
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:It lowers user's luck.
    -If uses in first post or last post,it's effects gets reversed.<--- how can you know it will be the last post and how does this make sense?
    -The stats given is cannot be chosen.
    -User can give the stats from herself's stats.<-- so you loose the given stat points?

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Bad Karma
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Ranged
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:7
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User converts her luck into 3 little bad luck energy balls and throws it to the opponent to harm it.In contact,energy balls explodes.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It decreases opponent's a random stat by 5.
    -It can harm the opponent.
    -They are level 1 darkness element.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -If uses in first post or last post,it's effects gets reversed.
    -User gets her stat lowered same as opponent.
    -They are deals less damage to element that's immune to darkness.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Fate
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Field
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:10
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User sends turqoise energy waves in field in order to suck everyone in the field's speed stat by 2.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It really increases the user's speed stat.
    -It's harms the opponent.
    -It's level 1 light element.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -If uses in first post or last post,it's effects gets reversed.
    -It lowers user's speed stat by 5.
    -They are deals less damage to element that's immune to light.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Luck Ray
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Ranged
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:11.
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User fires a turqoise energy laser.If hit to an ally laser it boosts his/her strength stat by 10.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It makes the user's ally more powerful.
    -The given stat's level can change by using it.(1 uses,next use it gives 8 random stat.)
    -It can change ally's only one attack's element that her ally is going to do advantageous against the opponent.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -User's strength stats gets decreased by 10
    -User's next attack's element get reversed to make the opponent more advantageous.
    -If uses in first post or last post,it's effects gets reversed.
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    Post by BlackWind:3 Wed Apr 30, 2014 10:59 am

    I edited it.I hope its really okay now '^^,also i didnt touch to the passive,making it not everytime only being active when user wants.Also,sorry about my terrible english.
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    Post by Storm Runner Mon May 05, 2014 11:44 pm

    listed some things and also Fix your range according to the sites present range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

    BlackWind:3 wrote:Skill Name:Kou-Kou no Mi

    Skill Type:Paramecia type Devil Fruit

    Skill Information:It's a Devil Fruit that sucks the luck of a person to make the user more lucky. It can also control luck and convert it to energy. It also can change the fate and fortune of the opponent. It's light element. It's devil fruit form is a starfruit with zigzags that patterned with yellow orange and pink in order.

    Skill Strengths:
    -It can turn the events by changing luck(stats) between herself, ally and the opponent.
    -It can support user's allies.
    -It can drop opponent's 3 finesse stats when user wants. << how long does it last for cant be for as long as you want.
    -When user activates fruit's passive ability, ally's finesse stats drop by 3 too. << how long does it last for
    -User can't swim and user can't use devil fruit power when in contact with sea stone.
    -If abilities used after and after, it's effects can be reversed. To prevent it, user must wait 1 turn addition to prevent ability reverse.

    Abilities LVL 1:


    Last edited by Storm Runner on Wed May 14, 2014 2:03 pm; edited 3 times in total
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    Post by BlackWind:3 Tue May 06, 2014 6:43 pm

    I edited it!And the how long is the stat changes lasts is written in information.Sorry for bothering you with so many errors :/
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    Post by Storm Runner Wed May 07, 2014 1:29 am

    i am sorry but I see no changes made to it.
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    Post by BlackWind:3 Mon May 12, 2014 11:07 am

    Sorry i forgot to add the range.And,i did everything and stuff how is it still the same before you checked :/ (Sorry if i'm rude and sorry for my lame english >.<)
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    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Wed May 14, 2014 1:50 pm

    Only one thing left then you are approved.

    BlackWind:3 wrote:Skill Name:Kou-Kou no Mi

    Skill Type:Paramecia type Devil Fruit

    Skill Information:It's a Devil Fruit that sucks the luck of a person to make the user more lucky.It can also control luck and convert it to energy.It also can change the fate and fortune of the opponent.It's light element.It's devil fruit form is a starfruit with zigzags that patterned with yellow orange and pink in order.All stat changes lasts for the end of the battle and when battle ends,everyone's stat changes turns back to normal.

    Skill Strengths:
    -It can turn the events by changing luck(stats) between herself,ally and the opponent.
    -It can support user's allies.
    -It can drop opponent's 3 finesse stats when user wants.
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -When user activates fruit's passive ability,ally's finesse stats drop by 3 too.
    -Seas,sea stone and sea salt.
    -If abilities used after and after,it's effects can be reversed.To prevent it,user must wait 1 turn addition to prevent ability reverse. - this is the only flaw, please to change the words after to over. Also state how many times it can be used before the stats are reversed.

    Abilities LVL 1:
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    Character Name: Levy Akatsuki
    Primary Skill: Hie Hie no Mi
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by BlackWind:3 Wed May 14, 2014 7:16 pm

    Done,and thanks ^^
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    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
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    Post by Storm Runner Wed May 14, 2014 8:55 pm

    Sorry I wasn't clear enough on my last post, that edit was to all of your weaknesses since you had the same thing in all of them. Fix that but other wise.

    Approved
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    Post by BlackWind:3 Wed May 14, 2014 9:09 pm

    I fixed it and thanks ^^

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