Tetsukashi Satsumi wrote:Skill Name: Yami-Yami no Mi (Dark-Dark Fruit)
Skill Type: Devil Fruit: Logia
Skill Information: The Yami Yami no Mi is a Logia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create and control darkness at will, making the user a Darkness Human. The Yami Yami no Mi is a large, round, light purple fruit made up of many small teardrop-shaped components with swirl patterns, and green leaves sprouting from the top. Its overall shape and appearance closely resembles a pineapple or a bunch of oversized and unusually shaped grapes.
Skill Strengths:
*Neutral makes the devil fruit user of the Yami Yami no mi's got affected by its health by only a little. Which means that every attack of neutral will not cause a huge damage of the Yami Yami no mi user.
*Air makes the Yami Yami no mi's abilities work smoothly without any complications.
*Dark energy that is from people makes the devil fruit's abilities makes the user not to fail in attempt to attack the right person.
Skill Weaknesses:
*It is a devil fruit so its natural for Satsumi to be weakened or die if she is directly at seawater. She can also becomes weak but doesn't die when her skin touches a sea stone prism , the effect of her touching one would make her feel dizzy and she cannot also use her devil fruit abilities. Haki users can easily defeat Satsumi.
*Light devil fruit which is the opposite of this devil fruit is one of its weakness since light consumes darkness and darkness doesn't consume light.
*People that are too kind hearted cannot be affected or feel anything when Satsumi attacked them with any of her devil fruit abilities
*Water, doesn't make the Yami Yami no mi's abilities work.
*Satsumi cannot control the Yami Yami no mi properly and she sometimes attacks the wrong person accidentally.
- Ability Lvl. 1:
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Dark Matter
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Range mid ranged ( 15-25 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Satsumi creates a big ball of darkness and throws it at her opponent.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
*Darkness because of the devil fruit.
*Dark Spirits because the devil fruit is made from pure darkness.
*Dark side of the opponent.
^^^Explain these a little more, like you did with the general strengths and weaknesses.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
*If Satsumi's opponent ate the Piko-Piko no mi she'll lose since her opponent is light. -Please, make this a more general weakness against light based figures or something in that way.
*Seawater is also one since the ability came from a devil fruit.
*If the enemy is too pure there will be no actual effect to the opponent. -Explain this a little more and give examples of pureness that can cancel this attack.
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Dark Golem
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defense close ranged (0-10 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The Golem is only used for defense yet it can also fight back. -Explain how the ability is done, how long it takes to make a golem and how strong it is. Maybe give him stats? And when is it destroyed? How long can it be active? These questions can also be answered by putting them into the strengths and weaknesses.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
*Darkness , it'll make the Golem stronger with defense.
*Earth is one since it's a Golem.
*Negative energy it makes the Golem more offensive.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
*Since the ability came from the devil fruit one of its weakness is also seawater. -Don't use seawater as a weakness for every attack since it's already a general weakness.
*People that are fast can make the Golem disappear. -Explain how and how much faster the people must be.
*Low with offense. -More explaining please
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Darkness Blade: 10 Slice Dance
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee close ranged (0-5 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Blades from the caster are grown in Satsumi's arms and attacks the opponent automatically. After ten slices the blades will disappear. -Ten slices or ten slices who hit a target?
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
*The darkness blades can consume actual blades. -only level one blades. But how does this work?
*Dark energy can make the blades have 2 slices more. -dark energy from another source than the user. That I will allow.
*Darkness can make the blades sharper and can also make the user faster when the ability is used. ^^^ Same as above. But how much faster in stats?
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
*Since the ability came from the devil fruit one of its weakness is also seawater. -Again, write another weakness.
*Very very very high temperature can make the blade melt. -How high?
*Satsumi's defense lowers. -How much in stats?
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Dark Cannon Ball
Ability Lvl 1 type: Range long ranged (30-37 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The caster creates a ball of dark energy and attacks it to the opponent. -This looks like the same attacks as the first one but with longer range. Please make it more different.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
*Shadows makes the cannon ball harder to dodge.
*Darkness makes the cannon ball faster to shoot.
*Iron makes the cannon ball bigger.
^^^All these need to be explained a bit more.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
*Flames can melt the cannon ball made from darkness.
*Glint devil fruit user can make the darkness cannon ball evaporate out of thin air.
*Seawater can also make the caster weak when it touched the seawater. -Again, change this weakness.
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Chains of Darkness
Ability Lvl 1 type: Melee close/mid ranged (10-20 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Satsumi makes chains made from darkness from her fingers (chains are burning with purple fire )and surrounds her opponent by the chains and then tightens it.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
*Iron can strengthen the chains.
*Fire/Flames can also strengthen it.
*Shadows make the chains stronger.
^^^Need to be a bit more explained as well.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
*Since the ability came from the devil fruit one of its weakness is also seawater. -Change this weakness too
*If Satsumi's opponent ate the Piko-Piko no mi she'll lose since her opponent is light. -make this a more general weakness against light based attacks/figures.
*If the enemy is too pure there will be no actual effect to the opponent. -need to be explained as well.
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