Tori-Tori no mi [bird model-eagle]

Gean Kasme wrote:[This is my secondary skill i was told by ray i could have it as my secondary]

Skill Name: Tori-Tori no mi [bird model-eagle]
Skill Type: Zoan
Skill Information:This Devil Fruit grants the user to transform their body into that of an overgrown Eagle. The eater of this fruit can also become a human Eagle hybrid. As a Zoan, the use of this fruit primarily effects the user physically, but it also gives them given powers of a Eagle.
Skill Strengths:
- Gean Can turn into a Human eagle Hybrid or a full eagle.
- Has the ability to fly -State how high she can fly
- Has sharp talon and beak
Skill Weaknesses
- Gean cannot swim or move in the water. -Create a new weakness, this one is already written on the normal DF weakness.
- Sea prison stone weaken the user and stop her from using her powers.
- Salt water will weaken Gean. -Add this weakness to the second one, also add Haki into the second one. So basically you create two new weaknesses and add this one to the second one.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blade dance
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts -Mention how long this lasts. The duration can NEVER exceed the cooldown.
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean transforms  her arms in wings and add haki making each of hr feathers blades. -You don't have Haki.. Also reword your description, it's confusing reading it.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Good for fighting multiple people. -State how much people she can hit as a max.
- Good for cutting people to ribbons.
- cuts thought medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Takes 1 post to Get ready.
- Weak vs people with heavy armor. -How weak is it versus people with heavy armor?
- Cannot defend with wings -This is not a valid weakness, create a new one.


Ability Lvl 1 Name: Falling feather rain
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean flys up into the air and send multiple haki covered feathers down below. -Reword this
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Area of effect. - Tell us how many feathers you can shoot, how wide the range is, etc.
- Good vs a group of enemy's. -State how many people..
- Cuts though medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Gean is stationary. -How long?
- Cannot do anything While firing. -Again, how long can't she do anything?
- Cannot cut though heavy armor

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Talon strike
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean covers her talon in haki and strikes her opponents. Reword this..
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Close combat -How close does the target need to be?
-Cuts though medium armor
-As strong as a sword. -This is not valid, reword it or change your strength
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cant pierce heavy armor
-Cant hit mid to long range targets -What's the max range she can hit? Use meters as an example.
-Can be easily blocked

Gean Kasme wrote:[This is my secondary skill i was told by ray i could have it as my secondary]

Skill Name: Tori-Tori no mi [bird model-eagle]
Skill Type: Zoan
Skill Information:This Devil Fruit grants the user to transform their body into that of an overgrown Eagle. The eater of this fruit can also become a human Eagle hybrid. As a Zoan, the use of this fruit primarily effects the user physically, but it also gives them given powers of a Eagle.
Skill Strengths:
- Gean Can turn into a Human eagle Hybrid or a full eagle.
- Has the ability to fly up to 50 meters. -How long can she fly up?
- Has sharp talon and beak
Skill Weaknesses
- Vulnerable to fire -10 endurance -10 strength
- Sea prison stone, Salt water, and haki weaken the user and stop her from using her powers.
- Weak to ice -10 endurence -10 speed.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blades
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  Duration 1 ability cooldown 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean hardens her feathers to become as hard and as sharp as blades.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Have the same characteristics as swords. -How is this a strength?
- Can cut though medium and under armor.
- Can fly while hardening. -How high can you fly?
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Cannot attack for a turn to harden her feathers.
- Can only use this for one ability at a time.
- must re-harden her feathers to use for another ability.
- Cannot cut though heavy armor. -10 strength

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blade dance
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean transforms  her arms into wings and uses Feather Blades to make it seem as though She was attacking with multiple blades. -How many blades?
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Good for fighting up to 5 people -Explain how it is good for fighting against 5 people and let's say not 4? or 6?
- Good for cutting people to ribbons.
- cuts thought medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Takes 1 post to Get ready.
- Weak vs people with heavy armor. -15 strength
- User cannot Defend at all with this ability. -Create a new weakness.


Ability Lvl 1 Name: Falling Feather Rain
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Duration 1 post Cool down 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean fly's up 20 meters into the air and uses Feather blades to rain down Sharp feathers that are as strong as swords.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Area of effect. 10 meters -Explain this a little more detailed.. This doesn't make sense at the moment.
- Good vs a group of enemy's. 10 people -Explain how it is good for fighting against 5 people and let's say not 4? or 6?
- Cuts though medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Gean is stationary for post after use
- Cannot do anything While firing for 2 posts
- Cannot cut though heavy armor

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Talon strike
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean Attacks with her talons to cut her opponents.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Close combat. 3 meters, 5 while flying.
-Cuts though medium armor
-Is stronger in one on one fights. +10 Finesse -Explain this one.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cant pierce heavy armor
-Cant hit mid to long range targets -Explain what the maximum range is.
-Can be easily blocked -Explain this again.
-weaker vs mutiple opponents. -10 strength -State how many opponents she can fight at the maximum. And how this is a weakness.

Gean Kasme wrote:[This is my secondary skill i was told by ray i could have it as my secondary]

Skill Name: Tori-Tori no mi [bird model-eagle]
Skill Type: Zoan
Skill Information:This Devil Fruit grants the user to transform their body into that of an overgrown Eagle. The eater of this fruit can also become a human Eagle hybrid. As a Zoan, the use of this fruit primarily effects the user physically, but it also gives them given powers of a Eagle.
Skill Strengths:
- Gean Can turn into a Human eagle Hybrid or a full eagle. -State how long she can stay in a human eagle hybrid or full eagle.
- Has the ability to fly up to 50 meters for 3 posts.
- Has sharp talon and beak
Skill Weaknesses
- Vulnerable to fire -10 endurance -10 strength
- Sea prison stone, Salt water, and haki weaken the user and stop her from using her powers.
- Weak to ice -10 endurence -10 speed.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blades
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  Duration 1 ability cooldown 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean hardens her feathers to become as hard and as sharp as blades.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Have the same characteristics as swords. (Its like each feather is like a katana or cutlass)
- Can cut though medium and under armor.
- Can fly up to 15 meters in the air. -I don't see how hardening her feathers is a strength for flying up to 15 meters in the air..
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Cannot attack for a turn to harden her feathers.
- Can only use this for one ability at a time. -Reword this, I don't get what you're saying.
- must re-harden her feathers to use for another ability.
- Cannot cut though heavy armor. -10 strength

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blade dance
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts -State the duration and cooldown.
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean transforms  her arms into wings and uses Feather Blades to make it seem as though She was attacking with a wing for of blades (15) -Reword this, again I don't understand what you're trying to say.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Good for fighting  2 to 5 people. She can swipe across the group and those that do not block with take significant cuts. -What do you mean significant cuts? Do you mean they take more damage than usual? If so, state why or how. If not take away the significant cuts part.
- Good for cutting people to ribbons.
- cuts thought medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Takes 1 post to Get ready.
- Weak vs people with heavy armor. -15 strength
- User must use this to use any other skill. -So you're saying that if the user wants to use any skill, she'll need to use this one first?
- Can only be used for one ability must re-harden after using an ability -Reword this, I don't understand what you're trying to say.


Ability Lvl 1 Name: Falling Feather Rain
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Duration 2 post Cool down 3 posts -I don't see why there's a duration on this skill.
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean fly's up 20 meters into the air and uses Feather blades to rain down 15 Sharp feathers per volley that are as strong as swords. -Reword this..
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Gean can have her feathers fall in an area of up to 10 meters and can adjust how lard or small the area is by going up or down in the air. -Mind stating how big the area of effect is if you go up or down?
- Gean can have her feather fall onto a group of enemies of ten or below.
- Cuts though medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Gean is stationary for post after use
- Cannot do anything While firing for 2 posts
- Cannot cut though heavy armor

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Talon strike
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean Attacks with her talons to cut her opponents.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Close combat. 3 meters, 5 while flying.
-Cuts though medium armor
-This move is meant for one on one fights because she can attack more often then when she was fighting a group. +10 Strength -How do you gain strength if you're fighting 1v1? Give me a good reason and I might allow this strength, if not create another one.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cant pierce heavy armor
-Cant hit mid to long range targets That are over 4 meters away from her
-If user has equal or more reflex this can be easily blocked.
-This move is weaker depending on how many enemies she is fighting at the time she can fight up to 3 opponents before this takes effect because the more there are the less of a chance to attack and she cannot attack mutiple opponents. -10 strength -You just said that you can't attack multiple opponents yet you can fight 3 opponents until you start losing your strength.. Reword this correctly please.

Gean Kasme wrote:[This is my secondary skill i was told by ray i could have it as my secondary]

Skill Name: Tori-Tori no mi [bird model-eagle]
Skill Type: Zoan
Skill Information:This Devil Fruit grants the user to transform their body into that of an overgrown Eagle. The eater of this fruit can also become a human Eagle hybrid. As a Zoan, the use of this fruit primarily effects the user physically, but it also gives them given powers of a Eagle.
Skill Strengths:
- Gean Can turn into a Human eagle Hybrid or a full eagle for a total of 5 posts.
- Has the ability to fly up to 50 meters for 3 posts.
- Has sharp talon and beak
Skill Weaknesses
- Vulnerable to fire -10 endurance -10 strength
- Sea prison stone, Salt water, and haki weaken the user and stop her from using her powers.
- Weak to ice -10 endurence -10 speed. -How are you weak to ice? Neutral isn't weak to ice.. Change this.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blades
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  Duration 1 ability cooldown 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean hardens her feathers to become as hard and as sharp as blades.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Have the same characteristics as swords. (Its like each feather is like a katana or cutlass)
- Can cut though medium and under armor.
- Can fly up to 15 meters in the air While hardening, any higher reduces the speed of hardening. -Add how long she can fly with hardened feathers and by how much it reduces the speed.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Cannot attack for a turn to harden her feathers.
- User can only activate ability's after she uses this move and must do it in the same post. -I still don't get what you're saying.. Reword this correctly please, or at least use multiple sentences explaining this.
- must re-harden her feathers to use for another ability. -I don't get this weakness. You're saying she needs to re-harden her feathers every time she's about to use an ability?
- Cannot cut though heavy armor. -10 strength

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blade dance
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean transforms  her arms into wings and uses Feather Blades to make it seem as though She was attacking with a wing for of blades (15)
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Good for fighting  2 to 5 people. She can swipe across the group and those that do not block with take multiple cuts.
- Good for cutting people to ribbons.
- cuts thought medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Takes 1 post to Get ready.
- Cant pierce heavy Armour
- If Opponent uses something like a shield this skill cant do anything to that shield.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Falling Feather Rain
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Cooldown 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean fly's up 20 meters into the air and uses Feather blades to rain down 15 Sharp feathers per volley that are as strong as swords. -I already told you to reword this.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Gean can have her feathers fall in an area of up to 10 meters and can adjust how large or small the area is by going up or down in the air. If you go down you reduce it to 5 meters if you go up you can make it 15 meters and be able to hit 13 people. -13 people is too many people. Reduce this to 5 - 8 or something like that.
- Gean can have her feather fall onto a group of enemies of ten or below.
- Cuts though medium armor
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Gean is stationary for post after use -This means she can't move for a post right?
- Cannot do anything While firing for 2 posts -This is the same weakness as the one earlier..
- Cannot cut though heavy armor

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Talon strike
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean Attacks with her talons to cut her opponents.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Close combat. 3 meters, 5 while flying.
-Cuts though medium armor
-Can Break Make shift shield -What do you mean with this?
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cant pierce heavy armor
-Cant hit mid to long range targets That are over 4 meters away from her
-If user has equal or more reflex this can be easily blocked.
-This move is weaker depending on how many enemies she is fighting at the time she can fight up to 1 opponents before this takes effect because the more there are the less of a chance to attack and she cannot attack mutiple opponents. -10 strength -Add how many opponents she can fight maximum.

Gean Kasme wrote:[This is my secondary skill i was told by ray i could have it as my secondary]

Skill Name: Tori-Tori no mi [bird model-eagle]
Skill Type: Zoan
Skill Information:This Devil Fruit grants the user to transform their body into that of an overgrown Eagle. The eater of this fruit can also become a human Eagle hybrid. As a Zoan, the use of this fruit primarily effects the user physically, but it also gives them given powers of a Eagle.
Skill Strengths:
- Gean Can turn into a Human eagle Hybrid or a full eagle for a total of 5 posts.
- Has the ability to fly up to 50 meters for 3 posts.
- Has sharp talon and beak

Skill Weaknesses
- Gean's feathers can easily catch on fire -10 endurance -10 strength
- Sea prison stone, Salt water, and haki weaken the user and stop her from using her powers.
- Its hard for Gean to grab things like a sword or people.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blades
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  Duration 1 ability cooldown 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean hardens her feathers to become as hard and as sharp as blades.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Have the same characteristics as swords. (Its like each feather is like a katana or cutlass)
- Can cut though LVL 1 medium and under armor.
- Can fly up to 15 meters in the air for 3 posts While hardening, any higher reduces the speed of hardening by 1 post every 1 meter. <-Reword this I have no clue what you just said.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

- Cannot attack for a Post to harden her feathers.
- Gean must use this ability before she can use any other ability and must do it in the same post as the one that she uses this ability.
- Gean must re-harden her feathers before she can use another ability.
- Cannot cut though heavy armor. -10 strength

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blade dance
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean transforms  her arms into wings and uses Feather Blades to make it seem as though She was attacking with a wing for of blades (15)
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Good for fighting  2 to 5 people. She can swipe across the group and those that do not block with take multiple cuts.
- Good for cutting people to ribbons.
- cuts though LVL 1 medium armor

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Takes 1 post to Get ready.
- Cant pierce heavy Armour
- If Opponent uses something like a shield this skill cant do anything to that shield.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Falling Feather Rain
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Cooldown 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean turns into a hybrid or turns her arms into wings and flys up 15 meters into the air and throws her feathers on a group of enemy's.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Gean can have her feathers fall in an area of up to 10 meters and can adjust how large or small the area is by going up or down in the air. If you go down you reduce it to 5 meters if you go up you can make it 15 meters and be able to hit 6 people.
- Gean can have her feather fall onto a group of enemies of ten or below.
- Cuts though LVL 1 medium armor

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Gean is stationary for 1 post While using this ability.
- Gean cannot dodge or block while firing.
- Cannot cut though heavy armor.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Talon strike
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean Attacks with her talons to cut her opponents.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Close combat. 3 meters, 5 while flying.
-Cuts though medium armor
-Can Break though shields

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cant pierce heavy armor
-Cant hit mid to long range targets That are over 4 meters away from her
-If user has equal or more reflex this can be easily blocked.
-This move is weaker depending on how many enemies she is fighting at the time she can fight up to 1 opponents before this takes effect because the more there are the less of a chance to attack and she cannot attack mutiple opponents. -10 strength up to 5 people

Gean Kasme wrote:[This is my secondary skill i was told by ray i could have it as my secondary]

Skill Name: Tori-Tori no mi [bird model-eagle]
Skill Type: Zoan
Skill Information:This Devil Fruit grants the user to transform their body into that of an overgrown Eagle. The eater of this fruit can also become a human Eagle hybrid. As a Zoan, the use of this fruit primarily effects the user physically, but it also gives them given powers of a Eagle.
Skill Strengths:
- Gean Can turn into a Human eagle Hybrid or a full eagle for a total of 5 posts.
- Has the ability to fly up to 50 meters for 3 posts.
- Has sharp talon and beak

Skill Weaknesses
- Gean's feathers can easily catch on fire -10 endurance -10 strength
- Sea prison stone, Salt water, and haki weaken the user and stop her from using her powers.
- Its hard for Gean to grab things like a sword or people.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blades
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  Duration 1 ability cooldown 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean hardens her feathers to become as hard and as sharp as blades.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Have the same characteristics as swords. (Its like each feather is like a katana or cutlass)
- Can cut though LVL 1 medium and under armor.
- These feathers have the ability on there own to block most swords.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

- Cannot attack for a Post to harden her feathers.
- Gean must use this ability before she can use any other ability and must do it in the same post as the one that she uses this ability.
- Gean must re-harden her feathers before she can use another ability.
- Cannot cut though heavy armor. -10 strength
- The higher gean flies into the air if it is past 15 meters it takes 1 post longer to harden her feather.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Feather blade dance
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean transforms  her arms into wings and uses Feather Blades to make it seem as though She was attacking with a wing for of blades (15)
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Good for fighting  2 to 5 people. She can swipe across the group and those that do not block with take multiple cuts.
- Good for cutting people to ribbons.
- cuts though LVL 1 medium armor

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Takes 1 post to Get ready.
- Cant pierce heavy Armour
- If Opponent uses something like a shield this skill cant do anything to that shield.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Falling Feather Rain
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Cooldown 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean turns into a hybrid or turns her arms into wings and flys up 15 meters into the air and throws her feathers on a group of enemy's.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Gean can have her feathers fall in an area of up to 10 meters and can adjust how large or small the area is by going up or down in the air. If you go down you reduce it to 5 meters if you go up you can make it 15 meters and be able to hit 6 people.
- Gean can have her feather fall onto a group of enemies of ten or below.
- Cuts though LVL 1 medium armor

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Gean is stationary for 1 post While using this ability.
- Gean cannot dodge or block while firing.
- Cannot cut though heavy armor.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Talon strike
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: Gean Attacks with her talons to cut her opponents.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
-Close combat. 3 meters, 5 while flying.
-Cuts though medium armor
-Can Break though shields

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cant pierce heavy armor
-Cant hit mid to long range targets That are over 4 meters away from her
-If user has equal or more reflex this can be easily blocked.
-This move is weaker depending on how many enemies she is fighting at the time she can fight up to 1 opponents before this takes effect because the more there are the less of a chance to attack and she cannot attack mutiple opponents. -10 strength up to 5 people