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    Jin's second ability

    Jin
    Jin


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    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Thu May 01, 2014 5:59 am

    Skill Name: Dead man style
    Skill Type: Close range
    Skill Information:It's a fighting style that only Jin can perform as a normal fighting style. This style consists in the fast movement of the user to jump and confuse the enemy while running around him.
    Skill Strengths:
    1. This style provides several ways to confuse the enemy. When attacking, they lose 10 reflex.
    2. Attacks of this style don't put many strength to make fast consistent combos.
    3. The user can quickly evade attacks even while attacking because of the nature of this style. Since he can move quickly in this attack, he can also react to cancel his attack and evade.
    Skill Weaknesses:
    1. The attacks and hits don't make much damage. He loses 10 strength while attacking.
    2. While attacking, Jin loses 5 reflex.
    3. If Jin uses for second time an attack, the enemy gets a 5 boost intelligence while Jin is performing that attack only.
    Lvl 1 abilities:


    Last edited by Jin on Sat May 17, 2014 2:27 am; edited 4 times in total
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    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Thu May 01, 2014 6:38 pm

    Bump
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    Post by Storm Runner Sun May 04, 2014 2:08 pm

    Sorry but this seems more like a DF power then a ranged martial art with the shadow teleporting and etc. If you want to try and change it so it doesn't seem like one be my guest but I am going to recommend a fighting style to suit your weapon or a martial art which is unique to your character for example you character is undead correct? You could call it Dead Man style and make it consist of punches, kicks and etc.
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    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Sun May 04, 2014 8:16 pm

    OK, thankes
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    Post by Storm Runner Mon May 05, 2014 11:09 pm

    Fix your range according to the sites preset range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.
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    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Fri May 09, 2014 3:22 am

    Ready
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    Post by Storm Runner Sat May 10, 2014 2:17 am

    please edit your range in as shown in this example

    Example:
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    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Sun May 11, 2014 5:52 pm

    Ready
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    Post by Jin Wed May 14, 2014 11:35 pm

    Bump
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    Post by Storm Runner Thu May 15, 2014 2:19 am

    I am currently looking over this no need to bump I will post up corrections when I have finished
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    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Thu May 15, 2014 3:00 am

    Ups sorry
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    Post by Storm Runner Sat May 17, 2014 12:34 am

    All corrections are in red. I also included spelling mistakes.

    Jin wrote:Skill Name: Dead man style
    Skill Type: Close range
    Skill Information:It's a fighting style that only Jin can perform as a normal fighting style. This style consists in the fast movement of the user to jump and confuse the enemy while running around him.
    Skill Strengths:
    1. This style provides several ways to confuse the enemy. -this has to be NPC only or/ -10 intelligence to the target
    2. Attacks of this style don't put many straight to make fast consistent combos. - Straight what?
    3. The user can quickly evade attacks even while attacking because of the nature of this style. - How? Does the fighting stance make the user more flexible giving them a +10 reflex?
    Skill Weaknesses:
    1. The attacks and hits don't make much damage. - okay how does that work out stat wise?
    2. If the enemy has a better speed than Jin, many of this attacks are easily evaded. - change this it's reflex not speed and it is a given.
    3. As this style has a kind of pattern that can be seen by people with a lot of intelligence. - I recommend changing this one completely unless if you can make it into a minus stat weakness.
    Lvl 1 abilities:

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    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Sat May 17, 2014 2:27 am

    Ready

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