Daimon's Secondary Skill

Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Sairento Kiringu (Silent Killing)
Skill Type:Fighting Style
Skill Information:It's a brand of martial arts, focusing on speed and strike vital spots quickly while also avoiding hits.  Focusing less on brute force and strength.
Skill Strengths:Useful for situations his devil fruit powers are ineffective.  
Extremely face and precise. - you mean fast and precise? if so how fast and how precise
Aimed at vital points and to strike enemy weaknesses. - now this is fine, just wondering how you will know their weaknesses.
Skill Weaknesses:Techniques, while are great at striking vital spots, if spots are defended well with armor can be useless.
Not built for brute strength, so techniques can be considered weak if striking other areas. - what do you mean other areas?
Relies on being faster then (than) opponent, if the opponent is faster, can be a problem in making contact. - how much faster than you?

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Falcon Swoop
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Movement
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts - if you want all three stat boost change this to 4 posts.
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user stays light on their feet, focusing on keeping ahead of their opponent and striking quick at any moment and being able to avoid any attack.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:+5 speed, reflexes, and finesse for 2 posts. - so total you will gain 10 spd, reflexes, and finesse? denied. too over power for lvl 1 ability. Maybe one stat bonus will be fine. If you want to keep this, make it into separate strength. Also, put that 2 posts as duration of the ability.  
Need at least 2 more strength
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:-5 Endurance is lowered due to focusing on dodging and not blocking
Focusing on striking vital spots and being precise decreasing brute force -5 strength
Focuses on movement, if on terrain hard to maneuver in (other then ice) technique can be negated.

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Soundless Murder
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 - since you are gaining stat boost, change this to 3 posts.
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes an opponents throat causing the opponent to get difficulty breathing if the attack lands.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can cause opponent's breathing to be hindered. - for how long?
The strike is quite fast,and hard to detect. +5 speed for the attack.
one more strength
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Must make contact
If opponent is wearing protection around neck. (armor, hard covering) attack can possibly not land.
one more weakness

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Quick Pre-Counter
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user sends a quick strike to an opponents when they attempt an attack causing the limb to go numb
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Striking a vital pressure point in an enemy limb negates an attack if making contact.
Causes enemy limb to go numb - for how long?

need one more strength
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
If enemy is wearing armor, the strike can be negated.
If opponent strikes fast enough their attack can make contact before counter, leaving user wide open. - how much faster? +5 speed? + 10 speed? be more specific

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Temple Ruin
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes the target's temple with a fast and precise strike, causing either headaches or concussions if precise enough.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Swift blow can cause strong headaches or concussions. - for how long?
need at least 2 more strength
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:If opponent is wearing armor can be negated.
need at least two more weakness

Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Sairento Kiringu (Silent Killing)
Skill Type:Fighting Style
Skill Information:It's a brand of martial arts, focusing on speed and strike vital spots quickly while also avoiding hits.  Focusing less on brute force and strength.
Skill Strengths:Useful for situations his devil fruit powers are ineffective.  
Extremely fast and precise. Doesn't boost speed but must have a minimum
Aimed at vital points and to strike enemy weaknesses from intelligence of the human body from studying.
Skill Weaknesses:Techniques, while are great at striking vital spots, if spots are defended well with armor can be useless.
Not built for brute strength, so techniques can be considered weak if missing vital spots
Relies on being faster then opponent, if the opponent is faster, can be a problem in making contact especially if they are at least 10+ speed or more - 10+ more speed than you or just having 10+ speed? I'll tell you what, it's not hard to have 10+ speed. I suggest you change this to +10 more speed than your speed or your strength or something or all your attacks will be dodged by everyone.

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Falcon Swoop
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Movement
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user stays light on their feet, focusing on keeping ahead of their opponent and striking quick at any moment and being able to avoid any attack.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:+5 speed for 2 posts - change this to one post
Striking a vital spot can result in -5 endurance for an opponent for a post
Multiple strikes can lower an opponents speed by 5 as well
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:-5 Endurance is lowered due to focusing on dodging and not blocking
Focusing on striking vital spots and being precise decreasing brute force -5 strength
Focuses on movement, if on terrain hard to maneuver in (other then ice) technique can be negated.
Ability Lvl 1 Name:Soundless Murder
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes an opponents throat causing the opponent to get difficulty breathing if the attack lands.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can cause opponent's breathing to be hindered for a post
The strike is quite fast,and hard to detect. +5 speed for the attack.
Lowers enemy endurance by 5 if struck
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Must make contact
If opponent is wearing protection around neck. (armor, hard covering) attack can possibly not land.
The area aiming for is small so quicker opponents can dodge especially if 10+ speed - again +10 speed more than your speed or just having +10 speed?

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Quick Pre-Counter
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user sends a quick strike to an opponents when they attempt an attack causing the limb to go numb
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Striking a vital pressure point in an enemy limb negates an attack if making contact.
Causes enemy limb to go numb for one post
one more strength
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
If enemy is wearing armor, the strike can be negated.
If opponent strikes fast enough their attack can make contact before counter, leaving user wide open. - how fast? having +10 more speed than you or by having +5 more speed than you? be specific.

one more weakness

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Temple Ruin
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes the target's temple with a fast and precise strike, causing either headaches or concussions if precise enough. - the duration of this ability is one post?
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Swift blow can cause strong headaches or concussions for 2 post - change it to one post and take out concussion and add -5 reflex for one post since the opponents will suffer from strong headaches.
A strong blow can leave an opponent dizzy for a post
The blow increases speed for the attack by 5

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:If opponent is wearing armor can be negated.
Missing the attack can leave the user wide open for an attack.
-5 endurance and strength due to focus on the speed and precision and not brute strength.

Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Sairento Kiringu (Silent Killing)
Skill Type:Fighting Style
Skill Information:It's a brand of martial arts, focusing on speed and strike(Striking*) vital spots quickly while also avoiding hits.  Focusing less on brute force and strength.
Skill Strengths:Useful for situations his devil fruit powers are ineffective.  
Extremely(take out Extremely, it all depends on your stats how fast it is.) fast and precise. Doesn't boost speed but must have a minimum
Aimed at vital points and to strike enemy weaknesses from intelligence of the human body from studying.(sooo. Reword this to: "Uses Intelligence and focus to pinpoint the enemies weaknesses through the study of the target's Moves and Techniques." something like that. ) (Put everything in bulletins, 1,2,3 style. --MUST HAVE 3 STRENGTHS AND 3 WEAKNESSES FOR EVERYTHING.)

Skill Weaknesses:Techniques, while are great at striking vital spots, if spots are defended well with armor can be useless.(Say that your Strikes are useless against armored spots. Basicly reword this) 
Not built for brute strength, so techniques can be considered weak if missing vital spots
Relies on being faster then opponent, if the opponent is faster, can be a problem in making contact especially if they have 10+ more speed then the user

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Falcon Swoop
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Movement( change this to support.)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts (This is more of a Mode that the Character goes into. so say it lasts for 2 post with a cooldown of 3.)
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user stays light on their feet, focusing on keeping ahead of their opponent and striking quick at any moment and(As well as*) being able to avoid any(Take out any. you can avoid ANY attack, this technique helps avoid attacks.) attack.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:+5 speed for 1 posts(you gain +5 speed for a post?--State it like this. "User gains +5 speed for a(Two) posts after this technique is activated.")
Striking a vital spot(While in this Mode) can result in -5 endurance for an opponent for a post
Multiple strikes can lower an opponents speed by 5 as well(If hit by the strikes while in this mode the target gets a -5 to speed.)
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:-5 Endurance is lowered due to focusing on dodging and not blocking(For two Posts while this mode is active. in order to balance out the technique)
Focusing on striking vital spots and being precise decreasing brute force -5 strength(For two posts--While this Mode is active)
Focuses on movement, if on terrain hard to maneuver in (other then ice) technique can be negated.

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Soundless Murder
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee(How close? put how far you can use it)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes an opponents throat causing the opponent to get difficulty breathing if the attack lands.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can cause opponent's breathing to be hindered for a post
The strike is quite fast,and hard to detect. +5 speed for the attack.
Lowers enemy endurance by (-)5 if struck (For one Post)
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Must make contact(put a negative weakness for yourself to balance it out. such as -5 Strength for the post this is activated. Basicly just for the attack.)
If opponent is wearing protection around neck. (armor, hard covering) attack can possibly not land.
The area aiming for is small so quicker opponents can dodge especially if they have 10+ more speed then the user

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Quick Pre-Counter
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee(Put how close you can attack, Range of attack.)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user sends a quick strike to an opponents when they attempt an attack causing the limb to go numb
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Striking a vital pressure point in an enemy limb negates an attack if making contact.
Causes enemy limb to go numb for one post
Lower's opponent endurance by 5 for a post due to making a limb go numb leaving them open.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
If enemy is wearing armor, the strike can be negated.(your strike.)
If opponent's speed is 10+ or higher then the user's, they can strike fast enough   their attack can make contact before counter, leaving user wide open.
User's endurance is lowered by 5 due to focusing on not defending or dodging but preventing the attack.

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Temple Ruin
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range Melee(Again, put the range. Exact range.)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes the target's temple with a fast and precise strike, causing either headaches for a post(Orrr? Causing either Headaches for a post, Orrr?)
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
Swift blow can cause strong headaches and lower reflexes for one post(by how much? -5?)
A strong blow can leave an opponent dizzy for a post
The blow increases speed for the attack by 5

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:If opponent is wearing armor can be negated.
Missing the attack can leave the user wide open for an attack.
-5 endurance and strength due to focus on the speed and precision and not brute strength.

Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Sairento Kiringu (Silent Killing)
Skill Type:Fighting Style
Skill Information:It's a brand of martial arts, focusing on speed and striking vital spots quickly while also avoiding hits.  Focusing less on brute force and strength.
Skill Strengths:
1. Useful for situations his devil fruit powers are ineffective.  
2. Fast and precise. Doesn't boost speed but must have a minimum
3. Uses Intelligence and focus to pinpoint the enemies weaknesses through the study of the target's Moves and Techniques
Skill Weaknesses:
1. Strikes are useless against armored opponents
2. Not built for brute strength, so techniques can be considered weak if missing vital spots
3. Relies on being faster then opponent, if the opponent is faster, can be a problem in making contact especially if they have 10+ more speed then the user

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Falcon Swoop
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts (lasts 2 posts)
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user stays light on their feet, focusing on keeping ahead of their opponent and striking quick at any moment and as well as being able to help avoid attacks.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
1. +5 speed for 2 posts after techinque is activated
2. Striking a vital spot while in this mode can result in -5 endurance for an opponent for a post
3. If hit by strikes in this mode can decrease target speed by -5 as well
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
1. -10 Endurance is lowered for the two posts this is active since focus is on dodging and not defending or blocking
2. Focusing on striking vital spots and being precise decreasing brute force for the two posts this mode is active decreasing strength by 10 for the duration of this move
3. Focuses on movement, if on terrain hard to maneuver in (other then ice) technique can be negated.

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Soundless Murder
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Physical Melee (Requires Physical Contact)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes an opponents throat causing the opponent to get difficulty breathing if the attack lands.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
1. Can cause opponent's breathing to be hindered for a post
2. The strike is quite fast,and hard to detect. +5 speed for the attack.
3. Lowers enemy endurance by -5 if struck for a post
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
1. Strength is lowered by five for the post
2. If opponent is wearing protection around neck. (armor, hard covering) attack can possibly not land.
3. The area aiming for is small so quicker opponents can dodge especially if they have 10+ more speed then the user

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Quick Pre-Counter
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Physical Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user sends a quick strike to an opponents when they attempt an attack causing the limb to go numb
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
1. Striking a vital pressure point in an enemy limb negates an attack if making contact.
2. Causes enemy limb to go numb for one post
3. Lower's opponent endurance by 5 for a post due to making a limb go numb leaving them open.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
1. If enemy is wearing armor, the user's strike can be negated and blocked.
2. If opponent's speed is 10+ or higher then the user's, they can strike fast enough   their attack can make contact before counter, leaving user wide open.
3. User's endurance is lowered by 5 due to focusing on not defending or dodging but preventing the attack.

Ability Lvl 1 Name:Temple Ruin
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Physical Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user strikes the target's temple with a fast and precise strike, causing headaches for a post
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
1. Swift blow can cause strong headaches and lower reflexes by -5 for one post
2. A strong blow can leave an opponent dizzy for a post
3. Swift blow increases speed for the attack by 5
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
1. If opponent is wearing armor can be negated.
2. Missing the attack can leave the user wide open for an attack.
3. -5 endurance and strength due to focus on the speed and precision and not brute strength.