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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Heart of Ifrit

    Aryeh
    Aryeh
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    Character Name: Love D. Aryeh
    Primary Skill: Kami Kami no mi, Model: Lion of Yehuda
    Secondary Skill: Shadow Priest

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    Post by Aryeh Fri Feb 21, 2014 7:42 am

    Equipment Name:Heart of Ifrit
    Equipment Level:Divine - 3
    Equipment Type:Divine bracelet
    Equipment Description:This amazingly beautiful golden bracelet has he heart of ifrit encrusted all around it blazing with beauty as bright shining rubies. The ruby like bits of his heart give off an amazingly warm glow that created a bond with the user's soul.

    Equipment Significance:This amazing second piece of the set of Divine bracelets was also found during the first mission Aryeh ever completed for the Revolutionary Army.

    Equipment Strength:

    -+25 Intelligence to user

    -User is immune to all status de buffs from all heat based skills and environments.

    -User receives a +10 endurance to all heat based skills


    Equipment Weaknesses:

    -User receives a -5 reflex to all water based skills.

    -Although user is immune to the status de buffs, he will receive the full damage delt by any heat based skill that lands on him.

    -All darkness based opponents receive a +10 strength on all skills used on user.


    Last edited by Aryeh on Mon Mar 10, 2014 5:35 am; edited 13 times in total
    Aryeh
    Aryeh
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    Lineage : Will of the D

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    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : Revolutionist


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Love D. Aryeh
    Primary Skill: Kami Kami no mi, Model: Lion of Yehuda
    Secondary Skill: Shadow Priest

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    Post by Aryeh Sat Feb 22, 2014 1:44 am

    bump - ready for review Razz
    Phoenix D. Jack
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    Character Name: Phoenix D. Jack
    Primary Skill: Mera Mera No Mi
    Secondary Skill: Rokushiki: Soru and Rankyaku

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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Thu Feb 27, 2014 1:01 pm

    Aryeh wrote:Equipment Name:Heart of the Sea
    Equipment Level:Divine - 3
    Equipment Type:Necklace
    Equipment Description:This amazing gold necklace with the most amazing blue gem, that is said to have been produced in the sea of heaven. The Jewel actually produces a pulse, that is said to be the heart beat of the mother sea. This amazingly rare jewel has a very strong connection and unique relationship with haki.

    Equipment Significance:This magical Jewel was discovered by Ayreh on his mothers birthday when he was 12 years old.

    Equipment Strength:

    -+25 strength boost to user<-- Let me be clear this is the divine part of your equipment everything else should be as a regular rank 3 equipment.

    -When user activates their Kenbunshoku Haki its duration is extended 1 post.

    -Jewel allows user to use his Kenbunshoku Haki one additional time per thread.<-- No thats none negotiable.


    Equipment Weaknesses:

    -Jewel contains a very strong pulse of the ocean, user is not allowed to use a devil fruit<-- you're allready not able to use a fruit, so thats a bad weakness find something else

    -When user activates his kenunshoku haki he receives a -5 endurance debuff.

    -Has a strong gravitational pull in the sea, causing user to receive a -10 speed debuff in ocean.
    Aryeh
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    Primary Skill: Kami Kami no mi, Model: Lion of Yehuda
    Secondary Skill: Shadow Priest

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    Post by Aryeh Thu Feb 27, 2014 6:44 pm

    Thanks for review!~
    I made edits and changes. Im not to sure how to develop a level 3 equipment as there are so few examples to really give. So im just basing off other Divine items and trying to throw my own wants or desires into it. However i think this one should be close if not approval now, i believe i gave adequate weaknesses as well. Thanks again!
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    Secondary Skill: Rokushiki: Soru and Rankyaku

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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Thu Feb 27, 2014 6:57 pm

    Aryeh wrote:Equipment Name:Heart of the Sea
    Equipment Level:Divine - 3
    Equipment Type:Necklace
    Equipment Description:This amazing gold necklace with the most amazing blue gem, that is said to have been produced in the sea of heaven. The Jewel actually produces a pulse, that is said to be the heart beat of the mother sea. This amazingly rare jewel has a very strong connection and unique relationship with haki.

    Equipment Significance:This magical Jewel was discovered by Ayreh on his mothers birthday when he was 12 years old.

    Equipment Strength:

    -+25 strength boost to user

    -When user activates their Kenbunshoku Haki its duration is extended 1 post.

    -When user activates their Kenbunshoku Haki They receive a +10 speed bonus for duration. <--- This is 10 stat boost for 3 posts its alot onto of a 15 you're allready getting, even more so it makes no sense how a foresight haki could improve all your movements... as having foresight hardly can help you out on attacks...


    Equipment Weaknesses:

    -Once Duration of  Kenbunshoku Haki is up, user receives a -5 speed debuff for 1 post. <--- this is to balance out the extra turn, have it say 10 and have it be only on the 3rd use as you're a champion

    -When user activates his kenunshoku haki he receives a -10 endurance debuff for duration.<--- you have 4 pieces of equipment, and 40 endurance, this here means you'll have to discard a piece of equipment while this is active

    -Has a strong gravitational pull in the sea, causing user to receive a -10 speed debuff in ocean.
    Aryeh
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    Rank 1- Limited Edition Donor 2- Richie Rich- Rich- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the D

    Beli Beli : 2073189
    Divine Coins : 100
    Posts : 170
    Race : Winged
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : Revolutionist


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Love D. Aryeh
    Primary Skill: Kami Kami no mi, Model: Lion of Yehuda
    Secondary Skill: Shadow Priest

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    Post by Aryeh Mon Mar 10, 2014 5:19 am

    bump ready for review
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    Primary Skill: Heaven Nōdachi Style
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    Post by Azure Snow Mon Mar 10, 2014 5:37 am

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    Aryeh wrote:Equipment Name:Heart of Ifrit
    Equipment Level:Divine - 3
    Equipment Type:Divine bracelet
    Equipment Description:This amazingly beautiful golden bracelet has he heart of ifrit encrusted all around it blazing with beauty as bright shining rubies. The ruby like bits of his heart give off an amazingly warm glow that created a bond with the user's soul.

    Equipment Significance:This amazing second piece of the set of Divine bracelets was also found during the first mission Aryeh ever completed for the Revolutionary Army.

    Equipment Strength:

    -+25 Intelligence to user

    -User is immune to all status de buffs from all heat based skills and environments.

    -User receives a +10 endurance to all heat based skills


    Equipment Weaknesses:

    -User receives a -5 reflex to all water based skills.

    -Although user is immune to the status de buffs, he will receive the full damage delt by any heat based skill that lands on him.

    -All darkness based opponents receive a +10 strength on all skills used on user.

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