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    Rarda Yana Fishman Reaper Style

    Rarda Yana
    Rarda Yana


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Demon of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 36667
    Posts : 17
    Race : Merfolk(Fishman; Great Pacific Octopus)
    Gender : Female
    Crew : Golden Ring
    Affiliation : Marine

    Rarda Yana Fishman Reaper Style Empty Rarda Yana Fishman Reaper Style

    Post by Rarda Yana Tue Feb 11, 2014 5:04 pm



    Skill Name: Fishman Reaper Style
    Skill Type: Multiple Scythe Weilding style
    Skill Information:

    A rare weapon form, even amoung fishmen and merfolk, due to the great number of blades one is usually required to carry with them to make this effective, this style is usually reserved for those with many arms or tentacles, so as to weild as many blades as possible. A master can slice througheverything around them, within a full 360 radius without a problem, even slicing multiple ships in a single movement, without any augmentations from other abilities such as Haki.
    This style was most commonly used to train an individual to take outlarge groups of enemies at once, making for a good first person to send in, or to hold off enemies until reinforcements arrive. Despite its name, the style requires very flowing movement to be effective, and at a distance, appears more of a dance than a fighting style.Due to the nature of the fighting style, overwelming power is not the core principle, but flowing movement, and exploiting weak spots in the enemies defences.

    Skill Strengths:

    1. More effective against multiple enemies (Minimum 3)
    2. All techniques hit multiple enemies within range. (Damage is split, but deals a little more if there are more people, minimum 3)
    3. If facing a single target, may make multiple attacks against them, equal to half the number of scythes they have, rounded up(Minimum 1).

    Skill Weaknesses:

    1. Less effective against a less opponents (1-2)
    2. Each hit does less damage that if normally focusing on a single target(If facing one[1] target, the user does not gain the extra bit of damage they would if facing three[3] or more enemies)
    3. Can only be Close Range, with a few techniques in level 2 and 3 that my be Mid Ranged.

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    Azure Snow
    Azure Snow


    Administrator- Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Captain- Senior- Novice- Player-

    Lineage : Legacy Of A Legend

    Beli Beli : 40516
    Task Points : 5
    Divine Coins : 10
    Posts : 716
    Race : Human
    Gender : Female
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Shichibukai


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Azure D. Snow
    Primary Skill: Heaven Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style

    Rarda Yana Fishman Reaper Style Empty Re: Rarda Yana Fishman Reaper Style

    Post by Azure Snow Sat Feb 15, 2014 7:25 pm

    Corrections in Red.

    Rarda Yana wrote:

    Skill Name: Fishman Reaper Style
    Skill Type: Multiple Scythe Weilding style
    Skill Information:

    A rare weapon form, even amoung fishmen and merfolk, due to the great number of blades one is usually required to carry with them to make this effective, this style is usually reserved for those with many arms or tentacles, so as to weild as many blades as possible. A master can slice through everything around them, within a full 360 radius without a problem, even slicing multiple ships in a single movement, without any augmentations from other abilities such as Haki.
    This style was most commonly used to train an individual to take outlarge groups of enemies at once, making for a good first person to send in, or to hold off enemies until reinforcements arrive. Despite its name, the style requires very flowing movement to be effective, and at a distance, appears more of a dance than a fighting style.Due to the nature of the fighting style, overwelming power is not the core principle, but flowing movement, and exploiting weak spots in the enemies defenses.

    Skill Strengths:

    1. More effective against multiple enemies (Minimum 3)(Reword this to: "Is used against 2 - 3 Enemies and is most effective when against multiple enemies")
    2. All techniques hit multiple enemies within range. (Damage is split, but deals a little more if there are more people, minimum 3)(Reword this Strength and take out the (Damage is split, but deals a little more if there are more people, minimum 3). I would say, "Techniques of this Skill Set are used To face multiple Enemies, When up against a single enemy the damage is split.---Although this would be more of a weakness, so find another strength.")
    3. If facing a single target, may make multiple attacks against them, equal to half the number of scythes they have, rounded up(Minimum 1).(Put the Maximum the user can have to strike a single target.)

    Skill Weaknesses:

    1. Less effective against a less opponents (1-2)(Say just one enemy. put the weakness i suggested above.)
    2. Each hit does less damage that if normally focusing on a single target(If facing one[1] target, the user does not gain the extra bit of damage they would if facing three[3] or more enemies)(Since we pretty much already have this weakness on the one i have above. Just put some sort of elemental weakness or something. such as Ice, or something. -5 speed.)
    3. Can only be Close Range, with a few techniques in level 2 and 3 that my be Mid Ranged. (How Mant Feet or meters can you go up to? Level one, up to -- , and then how many meters mid range?)

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    These are the main corrections which i have found. Bump when you are ready for your next review and we will see if you need any more changing. Smile

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