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Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Sword for Jack

    Phoenix D. Jack
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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Thu Nov 21, 2013 5:30 am

    Equipment Name: Pirate Cutlass
    Equipment Level: 1
    Equipment Type: Curved Sword
    Equipment Description: standard 28'' length cutlass-
    The appearance:
    Equipment Significance: A Sword with both offensive and defensive purposes, not his favored choice for fighting, but a necessary thing to have for when fighting people with weapons.
    Equipment Strength:
    -Good Lethal weapon, with a cutlass being a more maneuverable of its classes, makes it easy to do versatile and improvised moves.
    -Curved swords have the ability to direct the strain slightly away from the blade, making it harder to simply bash out of a hand or break, if handled correctly.
    -Having a Sword allows you to have longer reach, with your attacks.
    Equipment Weaknesses:
    -It can't do structural damage very well.
    -Cutlass has handle that’s too short for you to be able to take advantage of holding it in two hands properly. Meaning, when slashing directly against someone wielding a blade in two hands, he's the one with most chance of either losing the clash or worse loosing grip of the sword.
    -Worse at damaging heavy armor.
    -Most Swords has an advantage when thrusting the blade to maximize its piercing qualities, a Cutlass aren't able to do that, as well as a regular sword.


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    Post by Astoria Fri Nov 22, 2013 12:07 am

    Phoenix D. Jack wrote:Equipment Name: Standard Cutlass
    Equipment Level: 1
    Equipment Type: Sword
    Equipment Description:standard 28'' lenght cutlass-
    Equipment Significance: Nothing important other than a means to defend against things that are sharp.
    Equipment Strength: It is a standard Sword, with standard pro's.
    Equipment Weaknesses: It is a standard sword with no weakness other than it being standard there for nothing special.
    In general, please note that the more description, the better~ Smile

    Description:Can you give me more description of its appearance? What kind of hilt does it have, where does it rest on your body (or how to you carry it around), etc.

    Significance: Are you sure you only want it to defend against sharp things? (o-o) You don't want to parry other swords or try to block, say, a hammer or spear swipe? Those things aren't "sharp," but a sword can do more than defend against whatever one might call "sharp." Are you planning on not using this for offense as well?
    More detail here would be lovely, is what I'm trying to get at. As this is now, you leave a LOT of holes for your opponent's interpretation, and that generally can hurt more than help you.

    Strengths: I'm unsure of what you mean by "standard." List a few actual strengths (at least three but preferably more) of the weapon itself.

    Weaknesses: A sword has weaknesses. It has to. For example, maybe it's a bit heavy so your character's movements are slower?
    What weaknesses (or strengths) does this sword have in comparison to other types of swords (such as rapiers, katanas, etc)?
    Add at least three weaknesses, please, but more would be lovely.

    The way you make this sword sound, I could easily call it a toy sword, and that's definitely not what you want in combat. Be more descriptive and think a bit about your sword. What makes it worthy of being taken into battle?

    Bump when you're ready for review~
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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Sat Nov 23, 2013 7:37 pm

    Found out that we are allowed to have one level 2 equip from the get go, so figured a sword that wouldn't break meant less replacing to do.

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    Post by Guest Sat Nov 23, 2013 7:47 pm

    http://www.onepiecerp.com/t191-equipment-information
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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Sat Nov 23, 2013 7:52 pm

    changed it down to level 1, think thats what you were getting at?
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    Post by Astoria Sun Nov 24, 2013 2:57 am

    Phoenix D. Jack wrote:Equipment Name: Pirate Cutlass
    Equipment Level: 1
    Equipment Type: Curved Sword
    Equipment Description: standard 28'' length cutlass-
    The appearance:
    Equipment Significance: A Sword with both offensive and defensive purposes, not his favored choice for fighting, but a necessary thing to have for when fighting people with weapons.
    Equipment Strength:
    -Good Lethal weapon, with a cutlass being a more maneuverable of its classes, makes it easy to do versatile and improvised moves.
    -Curved swords have the ability to direct the strain slightly away from the blade, making it harder to simply bash out of a hand or break, if handled correctly.
    -Having a Sword allows you to have longer reach, with your attacks.
    Equipment Weaknesses:
    -It can't do structural damage very well, -5 damage against structures.
    -Cutlass has handle that’s too short for you to be able to take advantage of holding it in two hands properly. Meaning, when slashing directly against someone wielding a blade in two hands, he's the one with most chance of either losing the clash or worse loosing grip of the sword.
    -Worse at damaging heavy armor, -5 damage against heavy armor.
    -Most Swords has an advantage when thrusting the blade to maximize its piercing qualities, a Cutlass aren't able to do that, as well as a regular sword.
    I don't understand the "-5" bits you have listed in your weaknesses. We use stats here, yes, but not HP / MP / whathaveyou. I would simply take out the parts with the "-5," and then you should be set for approval~
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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Sun Nov 24, 2013 3:32 am

    Edited.

    Only did so cause thats how they wanted it in my skills... meh changed it to how you wanted it ^^
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    Post by Astoria Sun Nov 24, 2013 3:48 am

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    Phoenix D. Jack wrote:Equipment Name: Pirate Cutlass
    Equipment Level: 1
    Equipment Type: Curved Sword
    Equipment Description: standard 28'' length cutlass-
    The appearance:
    Equipment Significance: A Sword with both offensive and defensive purposes, not his favored choice for fighting, but a necessary thing to have for when fighting people with weapons.
    Equipment Strength:
    -Good Lethal weapon, with a cutlass being a more maneuverable of its classes, makes it easy to do versatile and improvised moves.
    -Curved swords have the ability to direct the strain slightly away from the blade, making it harder to simply bash out of a hand or break, if handled correctly.
    -Having a Sword allows you to have longer reach, with your attacks.
    Equipment Weaknesses:
    -It can't do structural damage very well.
    -Cutlass has handle that’s too short for you to be able to take advantage of holding it in two hands properly. Meaning, when slashing directly against someone wielding a blade in two hands, he's the one with most chance of either losing the clash or worse loosing grip of the sword.
    -Worse at damaging heavy armor.
    -Most Swords has an advantage when thrusting the blade to maximize its piercing qualities, a Cutlass aren't able to do that, as well as a regular sword.

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