Edoraldo [Finished]

GENERAL
Name: Edoraldo De Sperado
Epithet: Black Tainted Flower
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Sexuality: Gay

Affiliation: Pirate
Occupation: Champion

APPEARANCE
Appearance: A man with dark skin tone, sturdy body build, tall and strong that's described him the most before the heavy additional he have. He used heavy pink colored make ups such as eyeshadow, mascara, lipstick and blush on. He also dyed his hair with pink color and he wore only pink colored clothing with exception of his earrings which is yellow color star shaped. Usually he wear pink formal coat with pink fur around the collar with black net cloth under it. He choose to put dark pink tight pants for below part of his body and pink leather boots with high heels.
Hair Color: Annoyingly pink
Skin Tone: Dark
Height: 188 cm
Weight: 88 kilograms

TRAITS
Personality: Ral is a man with disoriented sexual behavior since he is a gay. He also like to wear girlish pink colored clothing and act flamboyantly. His behavior match an okama since he is one of them. Even though most of the okama will randomly likes handsome men, Ral has his own pride and will not easily falling in love to guy. This trait he has also helped guys around him to be more comfortable and can get rid of annoying behavior that commonly an okama has. He also a good actor (or actress) since he is able to blend in many conversation and cover his true intention with his friendly act which often helped him to get crucial information out of strangers mouth or sneak in to get closer to a certain target. However, he always avoid to get into a fight when the opponent were not his target. He also do not care who is his friend and who is his enemy, as long as they can gave him information about his family, he would do anything, either become a friend or enemy.
Behavior/Habits: As an assassin, Ral has a cold blood. He is able to kill person without having a doubt. Since he learn an okama way, he has a habit to point his pinky finger in every occasion like when he folding his hand, drinking from a cup or writing. He can't stand a beer and usually knocked out after just one sip, because of this he usually order a milk or juice in the bar instead of beer or rum. He always act friendly to anyone but will be serious when he about to fight or kill someone. When laughing he sounds like 'chuchuchuhuhu' instead of normal laugh.
Likes:

• Pink colored things
  
• Prince saving a princess
  
• Get rid of his targets
  

Dislikes:

• Any drinks with alcohol
  
• Any girl with huge breast
  
• Pervert
  

Motivations: Ral was born as a noble De Sperado family but he didn't know about this until lately. His dream is to find out about his family mysteries and secret. He also have a hidden agenda in his journey which is to find a prince-like husband who will protect him and love him with all of his heart ...possibly impossible.
Fears:

• Ghost
  
• Bugs
  
• Beer
  

History: Edoraldo was grown up in an unknown island in north blue under the name of Ral. He was adopted by a single woman who raised him like her own child. He and his mother always bullied by the citizen of that island since they are poor and he have no father. One day, Ral come back home and asked why his mother didn't get married. His mother always changing the subject whenever Ral talked about this. Ral cannot understand his mother intention to not get married already since she is a beautiful woman and admired by many man from the village.

Once Ral reached the age of teenager and those who bullied him get even more violent, his mother teach him a weird martial arts. After learn that martial art, Ral presume himself to challenge his bullies. The leader of those bullies is a disciple of Judo and defeat Ral without any serious problem. He said that Ral technique was weird, weak, ladylike and far inferior compared to his. Ral come back home with beaten up face and bruises everywhere. He cried and said that if only he had a father, he will be taught stronger and aggressive martial art.

His mother silently dropped a tear and said that she was sorry to not born as a man. Even though embarrassed by his girly martial art, Ral keep practicing the techniques his mother taught him. One night, an assassin barged into his house and silently killed his mother without any known reason. Ral checked his mother room after she woke up late and found his mother dead body. Before died, his mother able to wrote her last words to Ral. In the floor beside of her dead body, written a word which read 'You are De Sperado'.

To find out about the words that his mother wrote, Ral decided to become a pirate and searching information about De Sperado family which possibly the origin of Ral himself. He even work as an hired assassin so he can get much information from underground community. He also finished his martial art by become an okama. He realized that his martial art will not complete unless he has a heart of a lady, move like a lady and strong determination. He said that even though he has a body of man but his soul has merged with his mother and brought her will and mystery she hold with him. Before settings a sail, he prove his determination by beat up his bullies with a martial art his mother taught him. He said to them that a true martial art isn't about physical strength but to have a strength in their heart.

Bumpity~~

Personality have to be at least 150 words, right now it's 133 words
Behavior have to be at lest 100, right now is at 97.

Okay, i fixed the issues... How is it now?

Approved.