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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Shigure Kintoki

    Akoy Ramone
    Akoy Ramone
    Akoy Ramone


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    Lineage : Will Of The Adventurer

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    Shigure Kintoki Empty Shigure Kintoki

    Post by Akoy Ramone Thu Nov 21, 2013 2:15 pm

    Equipment Name: Shigure Kintoki

    Equipment Level: Level 1

    Equipment Type: A Katana

    Equipment Description: The blade is 3 feet long. There's a symbol of Shiguri Soen Ryu on the black hilt. The sheath is black. Overall, the katana is made from light materials, focusing on speed rather than power. He always hold the katana in his left hand.

    Equipment Significance: The sword was pass down from his father to him as a symbol that he mastered the Shiguri Soen Ryu. The sword is made to be compatible with Shiguri Soen Ryu which focus on the attacking speed.

    Equipment Strength:
    -The sword is light so attacking speed is increased.
    -The sheath itself is made of strong materials and can be used as a tool to block an attack.
    -It is so sharp it can cut into people like cutting cheese.

    Equipment Weaknesses:
    -Useless against a long range attack unless can get close enough.
    -Lack of attacking power.
    -Powerful attack might break the sword.


    Last edited by Akoy Ramone on Fri Nov 22, 2013 5:25 am; edited 2 times in total
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    Astoria
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    Crew : The Lost Pirates
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    Secondary Skill: Devouring chocolate ~
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    Shigure Kintoki Empty Re: Shigure Kintoki

    Post by Astoria Fri Nov 22, 2013 12:48 am

    Akoy Ramone wrote:Equipment Name: Shigure Kintoki
    Equipment Level: Level 1
    Equipment Type: Special Wooden Sword
    Equipment Description: Can only be used by Shiguri Soen Ryu master for full effectiveness in battles as it will change into a steel blade katana by using that particular style only
    Equipment Significance: A symbol of a master of Shiguri Soen Ryu
    Equipment Strength: 10 points against sand/earth element
    Equipment Weaknesses: 10 points against fire element
    In general, please note that the more description, the better~ Smile

    Description: Can you give me more description of its appearance? What kind of hilt does it have, where does it rest on your body (or how to you carry it around), etc.

    Significance: Are you saying that this symbol is on the sword? If so, that should go in the description~ Why is the symbol important? Does it mean something to your character? What makes this sword worthy of being used in battle?

    Strengths and Weaknesses: I'm not sure what you mean by "points," honestly. (o-o) Hit points? Because we don't use HP here. Your skills are used in relation to your opponent's to show the difference in, say, a novice and someone who's been fighting for years.

    Also, because your sword isn't elemental at all, I don't see why it should have any strengths or weaknesses against certain elements.
    You should list at least three strengths and weaknesses. For example, maybe it's a bit heavy so your character's movements are slower? (As a weakness)

    What weaknesses (or strengths) does this sword have in comparison to other types of swords (such as rapiers, cutlasses, etc)?

    Bump when you're ready for review~
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    Akoy Ramone
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    Shigure Kintoki Empty Re: Shigure Kintoki

    Post by Akoy Ramone Fri Nov 22, 2013 4:51 am

    Bump
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    Astoria
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    Secondary Skill: Devouring chocolate ~
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    Shigure Kintoki Empty Re: Shigure Kintoki

    Post by Astoria Fri Nov 22, 2013 5:03 am

    Akoy Ramone wrote:Equipment Name: Shigure Kintoki

    Equipment Level: Level 1

    Equipment Type: A Katana with water attribute

    Equipment Description: The blade is 3 feet long. There's a symbol of Shiguri Soen Ryu on the black hilt. The sheath is black. Overall, the katana is made from light materials, focusing on speed rather than power. He always hold the katana in his left hand.

    Equipment Significance: The sword was pass down from his father to him as a symbol that he mastered the Shiguri Soen Ryu. The sword is made to be compatible with Shiguri Soen Ryu which focus on the attacking speed.

    Equipment Strength:
    -The sword is light so attacking speed is increased.
    -The sheath can be used as a tool to block an attack.
    -Bonus attack when facing sand/earth element user

    Equipment Weaknesses:
    -Penalty against fire element.
    -Lack of attacking power.
    -Powerful attack might break the sword.
    Does the sheath block attacks only when it's on the sword?

    Level one items are essentially your everyday tools. Once your weapon is level two, THEN you can make it spiffy with effects (such as an elemental touch). Therefore, I'll have to ask you to remove the water attribute to your sword and adjust your strengths and weaknesses accordingly.

    Bump when ready for review~ :]
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    Akoy Ramone
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    Shigure Kintoki Empty Re: Shigure Kintoki

    Post by Akoy Ramone Fri Nov 22, 2013 5:27 am

    First time ever played on this kind of game. Mistakes will happen a lot, but i'll try to improve Smile
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    Astoria
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    Lineage : Will Of The Adventurer

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    Gender : Female
    Crew : The Lost Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


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    Character Name: Astoria
    Primary Skill:
    Secondary Skill: Devouring chocolate ~
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    Shigure Kintoki Empty Re: Shigure Kintoki

    Post by Astoria Fri Nov 22, 2013 5:34 am

    Shigure Kintoki MeiTerumi_zps37406497
    Approved~ :3 And no worries about being new or learning~ <3 It'll all come to you in good time~

    Akoy Ramone wrote:Equipment Name: Shigure Kintoki

    Equipment Level: Level 1

    Equipment Type: A Katana

    Equipment Description: The blade is 3 feet long. There's a symbol of Shiguri Soen Ryu on the black hilt. The sheath is black. Overall, the katana is made from light materials, focusing on speed rather than power. He always hold the katana in his left hand.

    Equipment Significance: The sword was pass down from his father to him as a symbol that he mastered the Shiguri Soen Ryu. The sword is made to be compatible with Shiguri Soen Ryu which focus on the attacking speed.

    Equipment Strength:
    -The sword is light so attacking speed is increased.
    -The sheath itself is made of strong materials and can be used as a tool to block an attack.
    -It is so sharp it can cut into people like cutting cheese.

    Equipment Weaknesses:
    -Useless against a long range attack unless can get close enough.
    -Lack of attacking power.
    -Powerful attack might break the sword.
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