Hellsing the Red Piano

Name: Hexel L Hellsing
Epithet:The Red Piano
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Sexuality: Straight
Affiliation: Pirate
Occupation: Weapons Master (Swords - Katana)
Appearance: I have long little bit of baggy black pants with a white button up shirt with red vest on. I also wear a light black trench coat that goes down to my thigh. I have long katana on my waist



he also wears this mask all the time



Hair Color: Red
Skin Tone: light brown, almost white
Height: 5 ' 11"
Weight: 170 lbs
Personality: He is always calm and peaceful. He always wears his clown face to hide his emotions. He likes to be in the forest and be part of the nature. Nothing really makes him mad, but he does get annoyed. Even if he does get annoyed he usually forgets about it in couple of hours, but when he becomes mad, he will not rest until that person is dead or forever ruined. He loves music and likes to read people’s minds and try use their thoughts and emotion against them. When he is mad he is fearless and heartless. How many times his opponents beg of him to let them live, Hexel kills them for wasting time. That brings another personality of his, he hates running late. He thinks it is extremely rude thing people can do to each other,  therefore, he always gets ready 2 hours prior to any event and arrive to places at least 30 minutes early. Hexel have very strong sense of being free unlike marines who like to keep order and law. He doesn't really laugh or smile but if he smirks at you and don't kill you, that means he likes you.

Behavior/Habits: He always wears nice vest and button up shirt, its like those are things that defines him. He also likes to carry his long katana which he uses time to time, also he cleans his blade every night. He wears this clown mask to hide his emotions from others, he never takes it off. He likes to sit back, relaxed. He like to sit far back when he goes to restaurant or any other places. He have this weird laugh almost like he is crazy like clown it goes something like this "hehehehe!" Somehow he always have toothpick sticking out of his mouth, and he likes to play with it.

Likes: 
1. Piano - because he can express himself with it
2. Katana - it is his primary weapon and also a weapon that was given to him by his master
3. Music - it makes him happy

Dislikes: 
1. Loud noise - he enjoys quiet and peaceful places, loud noise makes him annoyed and possibly make him mad
2. Heat - It makes him sweaty and smelly, just makes him don't want to move around as much.
3. People who don't dress up good - knowing he like to dress somewhat good, he doesn't like people who just walk around without proper attire, such as not having any shirts or weird hats that doesn't fit them.

Motivations:
1. His friends - even though he have troubled past, his friends always understands him and supports him to have better life. Also they are few people who he can call family

Fears: 
1. Insects - hate these little creatures, and that crunchy feeling you get when you kill it
2. Spiders - they are just weird and disgusting, also he got bite by a spider once and had a fever
3. Height - he just can't function properly, he is just scare of heights like most other people does.


History: 

When Hexel was just a kid, he had two friends he would always hangout with. As they grew they started to have different aspects about the world. When they were kids, couple of marines came to the town and started to give little kids presents. They all loved them, Haxel and his friends wanted to become just like them. Wearing white uniform, protecting the justice. These three would always go to top of the mountain acting like a couple of marines, fighting local boars in the mountain. Couple days later, these marines were about to depart and set sail to new world, and we all promised that we will one day become a fine marine. About month later two of his friends went to their relatives house on different island and at same time different group of marines came to the town. Hexel was very excited to see another group of marines, expecting the same amount of awesomeness from them as the ones he saw about month ago. Instead, they trashed the village, harassed women, stole beri from people by taxing them with ridiculous amount of money. Seeing how they acted, Hexel was pretty damaged inside and can't never look at marines the same way. He was so shocked that he passed out for whole week and when he woke up he became different person, he started to despite marines for what they did and how they acted under the code of Justice. Couple days later, his friends came back and was shocked what happened to the village and to their friend. Hexel explained to them what happened and also his change of goal, becoming a pirate to search for his own code. Even though they didn't agree with Hexel, they would support his idea and his own path. Each day they trained together to become stronger and stronger to pursue their dreams. As time passed, Both of his friend left the town to go become a marine, and as Haxel and his friends kept in touch by mail, Hexel also left town soon after that to become a pirate to start his own journey. As three friends depart to go separate ways, they promised each other to become the best of the best. To this date he does not regret his decision and promises he made with his friends and the fact that one day he and his friends may have to across their blades.

2 years later, now Hexel is 19, after long journey to unknown lands and training intensively with different type of people, he became much stronger. As he thought it was time for him to move to bigger world, he stole a rowboat from local fisherman, he set sail to the East Blue. While he was going to the East Blue, he forgot that he didn't have any food with him, he was so focused on stealing the boat he forgot about it. He didn't care and just laid back hoping to see the land or something he can eat. About hour later he noticed bunch of racked ships and passed by. As he was passing by he heard one of the dying pirate's last words, "Damn that female marine! taking us down with her katana...." and he knew it was his child hood friend. As he pass by the dead bodies of many pirates he knew how strong she became. Shortly after, he finally found this restaurant call Baratie, which later on he gathers some information about his childhood friend.

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redhairedshank wrote:Name: Hexel L Hellsing aka The Red Piano
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Sexuality: Straight
Affiliation: Pirate
Occupation: Musician/swordsman
Appearance: I have long little bit of baggy black pants with a white button up shirt with red vest on. I also wear a light black trench coat that goes down to my thigh. I have long katana on my waist, and carrys a red piano keyboard on my back.



he also wears this mask all the time



Hair Color: Red
Skin Tone: light brown, almost white
Height: 5 ' 11"
Weight: 170 lbs
Traits: He is always calm and peaceful. He always wears his clown face to hide his emotions. He likes to be in the forest and be part of the nature. Nothing really makes him mad, but he does get annoyed. Even if he does get annoyed he usually forgets about it in couple of hours, but when he becomes mad, he will not rest until that person is dead or forever ruined. He loves music and likes to read people’s minds and try use their thoughts and emotion against them. But what people don't know is that, He will kill anyone who listens to his music. He have a tattoo of a Clown face on his right shoulder and also a tattoo of a tiger on this back. On his mask there is a cut mark going down along the left eye. When he is walking or just standing still, he have his right hand on his katana and his left hand inside his pocket. He likes to have toothpick in his mouth just to play with it and pass time.

Behavior/Habits: He always wears nice vest and button up shirt, its like those are things that defines him. He always have little keyboard he carry around on his back so he can play at anytime. He also likes to carry his long katana which he uses time to time, he cleans his blade every night. He wears this clown mask to hide his emotions from others, he never takes it off. When he starts to play his piano, he always whistles what he will play before and makes sure there is marines around him. When he is done playing the music and sees the marines all fall asleep or goes mad, he uses his katana to finish them off.

Likes: 
1. Piano - because he can express himself with it
2. Katana - it is his primary weapon and also a weapon thats been given to him by his master
3. Music - it makes him happy and its his secondary weapon

Dislikes: 
1. Loud noise - he enjoys quiet and peaceful place, loud noise makes him annoyed and possibly make him mad
2. Fire - have a trauma when he was a kid when he was stuck in a burning house
3. Little kids - because they ruins everything, break it, play with it and they are noisy too

Motivations:
1. His friends - even though he have troubled past, his friends always understands him and supports him to have better life. Also they are few people who he can call family

Fears: 
1. Fire - same reason as above
2. Spiders - they are just weird and disgusting, also he got bite by a spider once and had a fever
3. Heights - he loses his conscious and just can't function properly because it brings the sad memory about one of his best friend who betrayed him


History: 
Hexel didn't always played piano. He was a swordsman. When he was still a kid, he found out his best friend betrayed him and tried to kill him, but in the end Hexel ended up killing him on top of a narrow bridge he and his friend once met the first time, he was so shocked by his betrayal, he could no long hold his katana again. Every time he held it, he started to imagine his friend's blood running along the edge. So he sealed his katana in the sheath and swore never to use it unless he must have to, locking his dark memories away. When he was 17 he left his town looking for adventure and try to get away from the past, one day he listened to beautiful piano piece on a governor's house. So he sneaked into this house and found that his daughter was the one who played the piece. He begun to talk to her and over time, they became closer and closer. Everyday he was there, he started to learn a piece of music from her, that's when he realized that he had a talent, talent to move people's emotions and manipulate them. As he plays the piano everyday more people would show up to the governor's house to listen to him. Soon he was called to the palace and became the king's personal piano player. As his name became famous, as did his affection towards the governor's daughter, and he asked her to marry him. Despite how famous Hexel was, the governor couldn't approve the idea of his daughter marrying him and denied their marriage. That's when Hexel decided to run away together with love of his life, but the governor found out and send the Marines after him. On the windy night of October, the Marines finally found where they were hiding and forced the daughter away from Hexel. Because of his past he didn't wanted to use his only weapon, his katana, but he knew if he didn't he would lose her forever. He broke the seal and take the katana out from the sheath and started to chop down one marine after another until there was only one, the marine commander. After hours of countless fighting between the two, they were both tired, they knew they had to end it quit. Hexel wipe out the blood from his sword and charged at the Commander, thrusting edge of his blade towards his center mass, but he couldn't believed what just happened, The Commander used love of his life as a shield, Hexel quickly took the sword out and cut the Commander into pieces. Seeing another person close to him dying because of his sword he cried out loud. Year later, he now wears mask of a smiling clown to hide his sad emotion, playing music to control the marines and whoever listens to it, chopping them down one by one with his katana, cursing the world. The world government soon realized how dangerous he was and put a bounty on his head with a nickname that every people will soon know, Pirate Hellsing the Red Piano.

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redhairedshank wrote:Name: Hexel L Hellsing
Epithet:The Red Piano
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Sexuality: Straight
Affiliation: Pirate
Occupation: Weapons Master (Swords - Katana)
Appearance: I have long little bit of baggy black pants with a white button up shirt with red vest on. I also wear a light black trench coat that goes down to my thigh. I have long katana on my waist



he also wears this mask all the time



Hair Color: Red
Skin Tone: light brown, almost white
Height: 5 ' 11"
Weight: 170 lbs
Traits: He is always calm and peaceful. He always wears his clown face to hide his emotions. He likes to be in the forest and be part of the nature. Nothing really makes him mad, but he does get annoyed. Even if he does get annoyed he usually forgets about it in couple of hours, but when he becomes mad, he will not rest until that person is dead or forever ruined. He loves music and likes to read people’s minds and try use their thoughts and emotion against them. He have a tattoo of a Clown face on his right shoulder and also a tattoo of a tiger on this back. On his mask there is a cut mark going down along the left eye. When he is walking or just standing still, he have his right hand on his katana and his left hand inside his pocket. He likes to have toothpick in his mouth just to play with it and pass time.

Behavior/Habits: He always wears nice vest and button up shirt, its like those are things that defines him. He also likes to carry his long katana which he uses time to time, also he cleans his blade every night. He wears this clown mask to hide his emotions from others, he never takes it off. He likes to sit back, relaxed. He like to sit far back when he goes to restaurant or any other places. He have this weird laugh almost like he is crazy like clown it goes something like this "hehehehe!" Somehow he always have toothpick sticking out of his mouth, and he likes to play with it.

Likes: 
1. Piano - because he can express himself with it
2. Katana - it is his primary weapon and also a weapon that was given to him by his master
3. Music - it makes him happy

Dislikes: 
1. Loud noise - he enjoys quiet and peaceful places, loud noise makes him annoyed and possibly make him mad
2. Heat - It makes him sweaty and smelly, just makes him don't want to move around as much.
3. People who don't dress up good - knowing he like to dress somewhat good, he doesn't like people who just walk around without proper attire, such as not having any shirts or weird hats that doesn't fit them.

Motivations:
1. His friends - even though he have troubled past, his friends always understands him and supports him to have better life. Also they are few people who he can call family

Fears: 
1. Insects - hate these little creatures, and that crunchy feeling you get when you kill it
2. Spiders - they are just weird and disgusting, also he got bite by a spider once and had a fever
3. Height - he just can't function properly, he is just scare of heights like most other people does.


History: 

When Hexel was just a kid, he had two friends he would always hangout with. As they grew they started to have different aspects about the world. When they were kids, couple of marines came to the town and started to give little kids presents. They all loved them, Haxel and his friends wanted to become just like them. Wearing white uniform, protecting the justice. These three would always go to top of the mountain acting like a couple of marines, fighting local boars in the mountain. Couple days later, these marines were about to depart and set sail to new world, and we all promised that we will one day become a fine marine. About month later two of his friends went to their relatives house on different island and at same time different group of marines came to the town. Hexel was very excited to see another group of marines, expecting the same amount of awesomeness from them as the ones he saw about month ago. Instead, they trashed the village, harassed women, stole beri from people by taxing them with ridiculous amount of money. Seeing how they acted, Hexel was pretty damaged inside and can't never look at marines the same way. He was so shocked that he passed out for whole week and when he woke up he became different person, he started to despite marines for what they did and how they acted under the code of Justice. Couple days later, his friends came back and was shocked what happened to the village and to their friend. Hexel explained to them what happened and also his change of goal, becoming a pirate to search for his own code. Even though they didn't agree with Hexel, they would support his idea and his own path. Each day they trained together to become stronger and stronger to pursue their dreams. As time passed, Both of his friend left the town to go become a marine, and as Haxel and his friends kept in touch by mail, Hexel also left town soon after that to become a pirate to start his own journey. As three friends depart to go separate ways, they promised each other to become the best of the best. To this date he does not regret his decision and promises he made with his friends and the fact that one day he and his friends may have to across their blades.

2 years later, now Hexel is 19, after long journey to unknown lands and training intensively with different type of people, he became much stronger. As he thought it was time for him to move to bigger world, he stole a rowboat from local fisherman, he set sail to the East Blue. While he was going to the East Blue, he forgot that he didn't have any food with him, he was so focused on stealing the boat he forgot about it. He didn't care and just laid back hoping to see the land or something he can eat. About hour later he noticed bunch of racked ships and passed by. As he was passing by he heard one of the dying pirate's last words, "Damn that female marine! taking us down with her katana...." and he knew it was his child hood friend. As he pass by the dead bodies of many pirates he knew how strong she became. Shortly after, he finally found this restaurant call Baratie, which later on he gathers some information about his childhood friend.

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redhairedshank wrote:Name: Hexel L Hellsing
Epithet:The Red Piano
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Sexuality: Straight
Affiliation: Pirate
Occupation: Weapons Master (Swords - Katana)
Appearance: I have long little bit of baggy black pants with a white button up shirt with red vest on. I also wear a light black trench coat that goes down to my thigh. I have long katana on my waist



he also wears this mask all the time



Hair Color: Red
Skin Tone: light brown, almost white
Height: 5 ' 11"
Weight: 170 lbs
Personality: He is always calm and peaceful. He always wears his clown face to hide his emotions. He likes to be in the forest and be part of the nature. Nothing really makes him mad, but he does get annoyed. Even if he does get annoyed he usually forgets about it in couple of hours, but when he becomes mad, he will not rest until that person is dead or forever ruined. He loves music and likes to read people’s minds and try use their thoughts and emotion against them. When he is mad he is fearless and heartless. How many times his opponents beg of him to let them live, Hexel kills them for wasting time. That brings another personality of his, he hates running late. He thinks it is extremely rude thing people can do to each other,  therefore, he always gets ready 2 hours prior to any event and arrive to places at least 30 minutes early. Hexel have very strong sense of being free unlike marines who like to keep order and law. He doesn't really laugh or smile but if he smirks at you and don't kill you, that means he likes you.

Behavior/Habits: He always wears nice vest and button up shirt, its like those are things that defines him. He also likes to carry his long katana which he uses time to time, also he cleans his blade every night. He wears this clown mask to hide his emotions from others, he never takes it off. He likes to sit back, relaxed. He like to sit far back when he goes to restaurant or any other places. He have this weird laugh almost like he is crazy like clown it goes something like this "hehehehe!" Somehow he always have toothpick sticking out of his mouth, and he likes to play with it.

Likes: 
1. Piano - because he can express himself with it
2. Katana - it is his primary weapon and also a weapon that was given to him by his master
3. Music - it makes him happy

Dislikes: 
1. Loud noise - he enjoys quiet and peaceful places, loud noise makes him annoyed and possibly make him mad
2. Heat - It makes him sweaty and smelly, just makes him don't want to move around as much.
3. People who don't dress up good - knowing he like to dress somewhat good, he doesn't like people who just walk around without proper attire, such as not having any shirts or weird hats that doesn't fit them.

Motivations:
1. His friends - even though he have troubled past, his friends always understands him and supports him to have better life. Also they are few people who he can call family

Fears: 
1. Insects - hate these little creatures, and that crunchy feeling you get when you kill it
2. Spiders - they are just weird and disgusting, also he got bite by a spider once and had a fever
3. Height - he just can't function properly, he is just scare of heights like most other people does.


History: 

When Hexel was just a kid, he had two friends he would always hangout with. As they grew they started to have different aspects about the world. When they were kids, couple of marines came to the town and started to give little kids presents. They all loved them, Haxel and his friends wanted to become just like them. Wearing white uniform, protecting the justice. These three would always go to top of the mountain acting like a couple of marines, fighting local boars in the mountain. Couple days later, these marines were about to depart and set sail to new world, and we all promised that we will one day become a fine marine. About month later two of his friends went to their relatives house on different island and at same time different group of marines came to the town. Hexel was very excited to see another group of marines, expecting the same amount of awesomeness from them as the ones he saw about month ago. Instead, they trashed the village, harassed women, stole beri from people by taxing them with ridiculous amount of money. Seeing how they acted, Hexel was pretty damaged inside and can't never look at marines the same way. He was so shocked that he passed out for whole week and when he woke up he became different person, he started to despite marines for what they did and how they acted under the code of Justice. Couple days later, his friends came back and was shocked what happened to the village and to their friend. Hexel explained to them what happened and also his change of goal, becoming a pirate to search for his own code. Even though they didn't agree with Hexel, they would support his idea and his own path. Each day they trained together to become stronger and stronger to pursue their dreams. As time passed, Both of his friend left the town to go become a marine, and as Haxel and his friends kept in touch by mail, Hexel also left town soon after that to become a pirate to start his own journey. As three friends depart to go separate ways, they promised each other to become the best of the best. To this date he does not regret his decision and promises he made with his friends and the fact that one day he and his friends may have to across their blades.

2 years later, now Hexel is 19, after long journey to unknown lands and training intensively with different type of people, he became much stronger. As he thought it was time for him to move to bigger world, he stole a rowboat from local fisherman, he set sail to the East Blue. While he was going to the East Blue, he forgot that he didn't have any food with him, he was so focused on stealing the boat he forgot about it. He didn't care and just laid back hoping to see the land or something he can eat. About hour later he noticed bunch of racked ships and passed by. As he was passing by he heard one of the dying pirate's last words, "Damn that female marine! taking us down with her katana...." and he knew it was his child hood friend. As he pass by the dead bodies of many pirates he knew how strong she became. Shortly after, he finally found this restaurant call Baratie, which later on he gathers some information about his childhood friend.