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    Madara's Primary Skills

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    Post by Hare Sat Dec 06, 2014 4:57 am

    Skill Name:Nikyu Nikyu no Mi
    Skill Type:Paramecia
    Skill Information:The Nikyu Nikyu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that bestows its user the ability to repel everything they touch when they want, and is physically represented as paws on the user's palms, making the user a Paw Human. The paws are permanently engraved into the user
    Skill Strengths:

    • The first and foremost strength of the fruit is that the user is able to push virtually anything they want to touch (when he wants) and send it flying at an extremely high speed. This includes both tangible materials such as people and objects, and intangible materials such as air and the sensation of pain.


    • This power offers the user an incredible advantage in battle, allowing them to deflect any attack from the same rank as the user without problems and higher attacks he can still reflect but he still gets some of the pain. 50% for one rank above, 100% for two ranks.


    • They are also able to harness their abilities to perform offensive maneuvers, such as repelling the very air around them at very high speed. These attacks are so powerful that they can leave paw-shaped imprints in rock.

    Skill Weaknesses:

    • The regular DF weakness


    • While the user is able to deflect attacks, they can only do so by using their bare hands. If the user's hands are otherwise occupied, being caught off guard for instance, they will receive damage from an attack that could have been otherwise averted.


    • Only the paw-pads on the user's hands gain any advantage from this fruit, leaving the rest of the body exposed


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    Post by Hare Sat Dec 06, 2014 7:31 pm

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    Post by Unitama Sat Dec 06, 2014 9:06 pm

    Every attack needs to have at least three strengths and weaknesses. If you fox that, I'll go in depth.
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    Post by Hare Sun Dec 07, 2014 12:09 am

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    Post by Unitama Mon Dec 08, 2014 1:00 pm

    Please bullet point all your strengths and weaknesses so it is much easier to read. For examples, look at my skills. You can copy my layout no problem.

    Coding for bulletpoints:

    [list] = the beginning
    [*] = a bulletpoint
    [/list] = the ending
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    Post by Hare Wed Dec 10, 2014 3:54 am

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    Post by Unitama Wed Dec 10, 2014 1:54 pm

    Edits are made in this color. Bump when you got over them all.

    General note- Up all the cooldowns. They are too low for such a powerfull DF. I know, it looks like I am nerfing it way too much but it is needed. The DF was desighed to be one of the strongest but on the site, we want to give everyone an equal change of winning in a fight, so we have to tone down the massive power. And these attacks are just rank one. You can destroy islands by the final rank, I promise. But for now, let's keep it decent in power. Not too great already.

    Hare wrote:Skill Name:Gura-Gura Fruit
    Skill Type:Paramecia
    Skill Information:The Gura Gura no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit which allows the user to create vibrations (or "quakes"),making the user a Tremor Human. The fruits looks like a large white apple with swirls all over it. It then has a swirly green stem at the top. When using the DF a white bubble will appear around the hands of Madara Example:
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    Or he could just punch or kick the air and crack it sending shock waves that way example:
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    The way it works is the DF allows when Madara punches or kicks to crack the air sending vibrations that create shock waves that destroys stuff.
    Skill Strengths:

    • This fruit's major strength is that it allows the user to generate massive vibrations, or shock waves, which can travel though virtually any medium, including the ground, the seafloor, or even in the air.


    • It can be wide spread so it can take out a building in one fell swoop.


    • And the last one is that it increases the power of punches and kicks of the user. -Always? By how much strength? Even without a buff?

    Skill Weaknesses:

    • since the DF could be wide spread he can hurt comrades in the process.


    • With a strong enough substance like seastone it could block the quakes.


    • And the last is the regular DF weakness.


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    Post by Hare Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:43 am

    Ok im sorry but i've decided that the Gura Gura wasn't really right for me. Paw Paw is just right since i'm a defencive type of guy and the approve guy on here isn't really on and it isn't listed on the taken fruits that this is taken so it have taken moves from him but thats because I didn't know what type of moves to put on here. again so sorry

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    Post by Unitama Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:43 am

    Nothing is approved yet so it's oke to switch whenever you want. I switched a lot too. I had firebreath fruit and rock fruit before settling witht this solar fruit. The only thing that sucks about switching for the both of us is that my reviewing starts all over again, so review in process.
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    Post by Unitama Fri Dec 12, 2014 12:37 pm

    I have not much time today so this is the first half. Bump when done and I'll look over the rest.

    Hare wrote:Skill Name:Nikyu Nikyu no Mi
    Skill Type:Paramecia
    Skill Information:The Nikyu Nikyu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that bestows its user the ability to repel everything they touch when they want, and is physically represented as paws on the user's palms, making the user a Paw Human. The paws are permanently engraved into the user
    Skill Strengths:

    • The first and foremost strength of the fruit is that the user is able to push virtually anything they want to touch (when he wants) and send it flying at an extremely high speed. This includes both tangible materials such as people and objects, and intangible materials such as air and the sensation of pain.


    • This power offers the user an incredible advantage in battle, allowing them to deflect any attack. -I know that this is the core power of the fruit but it needs a little nerfing since this is a rp-forum. So I say, it can deflect any attack from the same rank as the user without problems and higher attacks he can still reflect but he still gets some of the pain. 50% for one rank above, 100% for two ranks.


    • They are also able to harness their abilities to perform offensive maneuvers, such as repelling the very air around them at very high speed. These attacks are so powerful that they can leave paw-shaped imprints in rock.

    Skill Weaknesses:

    • The regular DF weakness


    • While the user is able to deflect attacks, they can only do so by using their bare hands. If the user's hands are otherwise occupied, being caught off guard for instance, they will receive damage from an attack that could have been otherwise averted.


    • As a 'Cute type' fruit, the user may be laughed at for being a 'paw human' or for the silly looking pads on their hands. -not really a valid weakness and can even work as a strength to catch people off guard. Change this one.


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    Post by Hare Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:04 pm

    I think I did fixes

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    Post by Hare Tue Dec 16, 2014 2:52 pm

    Bump?

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