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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Cybernetics

    James Yukza
    James Yukza


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Demon of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 3251
    Posts : 11
    Race : Cyborg
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Savage Hearts
    Affiliation : Pirate

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    Post by James Yukza Sun Jul 13, 2014 9:42 am

    Skill Name: Cybernetics
    Skill Type: Cybernetics
    Skill Information: James uses mechanical parts installed into him to shoot lasers, explosives such as bombs, firecrackers and grenades at the enemy. The skill also encompasses enhanced parts of James body which can be used at will. (Long Range Skill. Understanding Close range 0-10 meters.Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40. as the ranges)

    Skill Strengths:
    -He can create extremely powerful blasts of energy fuelled by a mixture of gas and a special liquid designed by James himself
    -Long Range: James skills can cover up to 40 meters at a time and is useful on multiple enemies
    -Heat Seeking: These missile can track NPC and non Player opponents with top precision using James built in scope in his eyes.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    -He needs to refuel after every two skills. James has to charge up enough fuel for his cybernetics to work. After two skills being used, James is rendered motionless for two posts. He can still talk and run but cannot attack.
    -James abilities being fire based are weak against water surfaces, anybody of water and or tough rocky terrain and platforms. The more denser the body, the harder it is for his attack to penetrate
    -Over Heating: After three attacks, James becomes unable to use his heat seeking properly.
    -Human Instinct: Heat seeking cannot be used on players. (Stats Come into Play)

    Rank 1 Techniques:


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    James Yukza
    James Yukza


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Demon of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 3251
    Posts : 11
    Race : Cyborg
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Savage Hearts
    Affiliation : Pirate

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    Post by James Yukza Tue Jul 15, 2014 1:48 am

    bump
    Rylan the Prodigy
    Rylan the Prodigy


    Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Player-

    Lineage : Prince of Darkness

    Beli Beli : 41013
    Task Points : 1
    Posts : 151
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : The Executioners
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Rylan Kura
    Primary Skill: Goro Goro no mi
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Rylan the Prodigy Tue Jul 15, 2014 5:42 am

    Corrections are made in red. I stopped half way because you should know the general idea what is wrong with it and what not.

    James Yukza wrote:Skill Name:cybernetics
    Skill Type:cybernetics
    Skill Information:He uses mechanical parts installed into him to shoot lasers
    Skill Strengths:He can create extremely powerful blasts of energy,They can go pretty far,They have deadly accuracy.
    Skill Weaknesses: He needs to refuel after every 30 blasts, -How is this a weakness? What happens when you refuel? Does that mean every 30 post you can't do anything for a post or something?
    Does not go that far, -State what the maximum range is.
    He gets knocked back from the stronger blasts -This is more a weakness for your skills s than being a cyborg.


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Hand burst
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:field
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: He puts both hands out and sends a short wave burst of light
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Strong blast -State how strong it is. Do you gain a stat or something?
    -Wide range -State what the max range is.
    -multipurpose -This is not even a strength.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Powerful recoil -How is this a weakness while RPing, what happens when you recoil?
    -Takes 2 blast worth of fuel
    -It takes time to reload -State how long it takes to reload.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Light show
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Field
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:He puts his hands into the air and lasers rain down from above
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Super strong -State how strong it is. Do you gain a stat or something?
    -Many projectiles -This isn't a valid strength.
    -Hard to dodge -This isn't a valid strength.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Long refuel -How long?
    -it hits random spots -I already told you yesterday on the chat that this isn't a valid weakness.
    - It knocks him ten feet back from recoil

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:long shot
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: long ranged (20 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:a weak but penetrating shot that can be shot from far away
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -long ranged -How far?
    -Hi super eyes help his accurcy
    -Can slice stuff
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Can only slice something  under 30 endurance
    -He needs time to activate
    -each blast is not that powerful by themselves but together they can be destructive

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Lazzer bomb
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid range(15 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 12 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: He opens his mouth and a blast comes out that causes a huge explosion.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Can destroy a whole building
    -Can take out a whole group of minions
    -His most powerful attack
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Takes a very long time to reload
    -Recoil is so strong he might brake some parts
    -Not very long ranged
    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Lazzer beam
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid()10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:[b/] can use it five times than cools down for one post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:He puts out his hand or opens his mouth to shot a laser.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -low cool down time
    -reliable
    -somewhat range
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Not very powerful
    -Can not blast far away objects
    -He has to be able to see his target
    James Yukza
    James Yukza


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Demon of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 3251
    Posts : 11
    Race : Cyborg
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Savage Hearts
    Affiliation : Pirate

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    Post by James Yukza Sat Jul 19, 2014 6:54 pm

    bump
    Azure Snow
    Azure Snow


    Administrator- Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Captain- Senior- Novice- Player-

    Lineage : Legacy Of A Legend

    Beli Beli : 40516
    Task Points : 5
    Divine Coins : 10
    Posts : 716
    Race : Human
    Gender : Female
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Shichibukai


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Azure D. Snow
    Primary Skill: Heaven Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style

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    Post by Azure Snow Sun Jul 20, 2014 1:13 am

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    James Yukza wrote:Skill Name: Cybernetics
    Skill Type: Cybernetics
    Skill Information: James uses mechanical parts installed into him to shoot lasers, explosives such as bombs, firecrackers and grenades at the enemy. The skill also encompasses enhanced parts of James body which can be used at will. (Long Range Skill. Understanding Close range 0-10 meters.Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40. as the ranges)

    Skill Strengths:
    -He can create extremely powerful blasts of energy fuelled by a mixture of gas and a special liquid designed by James himself
    -Long Range: James skills can cover up to 40 meters at a time and is useful on multiple enemies
    -Heat Seeking: These missile can track NPC and non Player opponents with top precision using James built in scope in his eyes.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    -He needs to refuel after every two skills. James has to charge up enough fuel for his cybernetics to work. After two skills being used, James is rendered motionless for two posts. He can still talk and run but cannot attack.
    -James abilities being fire based are weak against water surfaces, anybody of water and or tough rocky terrain and platforms. The more denser the body, the harder it is for his attack to penetrate
    -Over Heating: After three attacks, James becomes unable to use his heat seeking properly.
    -Human Instinct: Heat seeking cannot be used on players. (Stats Come into Play)

    Rank 1 Techniques:

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