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    Potaru Potaru no Mi

    Axel Rover
    Axel Rover


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    Character Name: Axel Rover
    Primary Skill: Potaru Potaru no Mi (Portal Portal Fruit)
    Secondary Skill: Black Leg Style

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    Post by Axel Rover Mon Jul 07, 2014 4:05 am

    Skill Name: Potaru Potaru no Mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: Potaru Potaru no Mi is a paramecia-type devil fruit that allows the user to create portals from there body, and these portals are connected to eachother in a way that if an object was thrown into one, it would come out of the other in an instant. The user can create portals in all shapes and sizes, being able to create the perfect-fitting one for the right time. Each portal created has a "face" on one side, and things that go through it and out of come through only that side, so if anything touch the other side, it would either break the portal or bluntly bounce off of it. Each portal is blue, and the "face" side of them has a purple outline.  Also, a person looking closely enough can see from one "face" what is ever beyond the other "face." Portals take 2 Lvl.1 hits to break.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user can travel across long distances by just jumping through one of the portals.

    - The user can defend himself by sending on-coming attacks through another portal.

    - The user in some cases can make more than two portals, allowing for more objects to be teleported at a time.

    - Portals are extra resistant against earth and light-affiliated skills, so it takes twice as much damage to destroy most portals, which is four Lvl.1 hits.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A portal can be destroyed if it is attacked on the side that is not the "face." Usually one Lvl.1 slash with a sword, or a really strong Lvl.1 punch is all that is needed to destroy it. A person could also break the portal by striking it on it's edges. People can also grab the edges and move them around.

    - A portal can only have other objects pass through it, they can't go through anything, and the only thing it can really break through is glass. For example, a portal cannot phase through a ship, since there are parts of it that are tangible.

    - The devil fruit makes it so that the user cannot swim, and the user cannot use his powers in the sea.

    - Portals are especially weak to Fire and Darkness type-techniques. While usually it takes an actual attack to break most portals, so much as a touch from fire or darkness-affiliated skills will make the portal dissipate, which is essentially one Lvl.1 hit.

    Lvl 1 Abilities:

    Note: speed of the portals don't apply to PVP.


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    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:04 am

    Please edit your skill to add in it's range in as shown in this example below and according to the sites pre-set range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Zoom-Zoom Bullet
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee mid/close ranged (0 - 20 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2
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    Post by Storm Runner Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:51 am

    please make sure all of your skills have an equal number of strengths and weaknesses. Also address all in red.

    Axel Rover wrote:Skill Name: Potaru Potaru no Mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: Potaru Potaru No Mi is a paramecia-type devil fruit that allows the user to create portals from there body, and these portals are connected to eachother in a way that if an object was thrown into one, it would come out of the other in an instant. The user can create portals in all shapes and sizes, being able to create the perfect-fitting one for the right time. Each portal created has a "face" on one side, and things that go through it and out of come through only that side, so if anything touch the other side, it would either break the portal or bluntly bounce off of it. Each portal is blue, and the "face" side of them has a purple outline.  Also, a person looking closely enough can see from one "face" what is ever beyond the other "face."

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user can travel across long distances by just jumping through one of the portals.
    - The user can defend himself by sending on-coming attacks through another portal.
    - The user in some cases can make more than two portals, allowing for more objects to be teleported at a time.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A portal can be destroyed if it is attacked on the side that is not the "face." Usually one slash with a sword, or a really strong punch is all that is needed to destroy it. -I find something wrong here yes I understand and I am okay with a side that one person can't travel through and that is how you could destroy the portal by force but wouldn't that also apply to the edge of the face you could travel through? for example a horizontal sword swipe that begins out side the portal edge and comes into contact with it.
    - A portal can only have other objects pass through it, they can't go through anything, and the only thing it can really break through is glass. -please explain this in more detail
    - Ever portal has a range, so they can not go farther than that range away from Axel.
    - The devil fruit makes it so that the user cannot swim, and the user cannot use his powers in the sea.

    *please add in your elemental strengths and weakness I would classify this as nuteral.*

    Lvl 1 Abilities:


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    Axel Rover
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    Character Name: Axel Rover
    Primary Skill: Potaru Potaru no Mi (Portal Portal Fruit)
    Secondary Skill: Black Leg Style

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    Post by Axel Rover Wed Jul 09, 2014 5:03 am

    Bump
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    Character Name: Axel Rover
    Primary Skill: Potaru Potaru no Mi (Portal Portal Fruit)
    Secondary Skill: Black Leg Style

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    Post by Axel Rover Wed Jul 09, 2014 5:36 am

    Bumping again
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    Post by Storm Runner Wed Jul 09, 2014 6:47 am

    okay before I approve I have one question. Since the side/edges of the tangible does that mean a person can grab hold of the portal and forcibly move it?
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    Primary Skill: Potaru Potaru no Mi (Portal Portal Fruit)
    Secondary Skill: Black Leg Style

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    Post by Axel Rover Wed Jul 09, 2014 6:49 am

    Yes they can. Added that to the weakness, so, Bump
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    Post by Storm Runner Wed Jul 09, 2014 6:55 am

    okay I found one more thing, sorry.

    you stated your elemental weakness, but you did not state your elemental strengths. Also remember you need to have an equal number of weaknesses and strengths.

    Axel Rover wrote:Skill Name: Potaru Potaru no Mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: Potaru Potaru No Mi is a paramecia-type devil fruit that allows the user to create portals from there body, and these portals are connected to eachother in a way that if an object was thrown into one, it would come out of the other in an instant. The user can create portals in all shapes and sizes, being able to create the perfect-fitting one for the right time. Each portal created has a "face" on one side, and things that go through it and out of come through only that side, so if anything touch the other side, it would either break the portal or bluntly bounce off of it. Each portal is blue, and the "face" side of them has a purple outline.  Also, a person looking closely enough can see from one "face" what is ever beyond the other "face."

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user can travel across long distances by just jumping through one of the portals.

    - The user can defend himself by sending on-coming attacks through another portal.

    - The user in some cases can make more than two portals, allowing for more objects to be teleported at a time.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A portal can be destroyed if it is attacked on the side that is not the "face." Usually one slash with a sword, or a really strong punch is all that is needed to destroy it. A person could also break the portal by striking it on it's edges. People can also grab the edges and move them around.

    - A portal can only have other objects pass through it, they can't go through anything, and the only thing it can really break through is glass. For example, a portal cannot phase through a ship, since there are parts of it that are tangible.

    - Ever portal has a range, so they can not go farther than that range away from Axel.

    - The devil fruit makes it so that the user cannot swim, and the user cannot use his powers in the sea.

    - Portals are especially weak to Fire and Darkness type-techniques. -how is it weak?

    Lvl 1 Abilities:

    Note: speed of the portals don't apply to PVP.
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    Character Name: Axel Rover
    Primary Skill: Potaru Potaru no Mi (Portal Portal Fruit)
    Secondary Skill: Black Leg Style

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    Post by Axel Rover Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:14 am

    Bump
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    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:39 am

    please add a hit count to the portal

    Axel Rover wrote:Skill Name: Potaru Potaru no Mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: Potaru Potaru no Mi is a paramecia-type devil fruit that allows the user to create portals from there body, and these portals are connected to eachother in a way that if an object was thrown into one, it would come out of the other in an instant. The user can create portals in all shapes and sizes, being able to create the perfect-fitting one for the right time. Each portal created has a "face" on one side, and things that go through it and out of come through only that side, so if anything touch the other side, it would either break the portal or bluntly bounce off of it. Each portal is blue, and the "face" side of them has a purple outline.  Also, a person looking closely enough can see from one "face" what is ever beyond the other "face."

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user can travel across long distances by just jumping through one of the portals.

    - The user can defend himself by sending on-coming attacks through another portal.

    - The user in some cases can make more than two portals, allowing for more objects to be teleported at a time.

    - Portals are extra resistant against earth and light-affiliated skills, so it takes twice as much damae to destroy most portals. -state out how many hits it take

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A portal can be destroyed if it is attacked on the side that is not the "face." Usually one slash with a sword, or a really strong punch is all that is needed to destroy it. A person could also break the portal by striking it on it's edges. People can also grab the edges and move them around.

    - A portal can only have other objects pass through it, they can't go through anything, and the only thing it can really break through is glass. For example, a portal cannot phase through a ship, since there are parts of it that are tangible.

    - The devil fruit makes it so that the user cannot swim, and the user cannot use his powers in the sea.

    - Portals are especially weak to Fire and Darkness type-techniques. While usually it takes an actual attack to break most portals, so much as a touch from fire or darkness-affiliated skills will make the portal dissipate -state out how many hits it take

    Lvl 1 Abilities:

    Note: speed of the portals don't apply to PVP.
    Axel Rover
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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Axel Rover
    Primary Skill: Potaru Potaru no Mi (Portal Portal Fruit)
    Secondary Skill: Black Leg Style

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    Post by Axel Rover Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:43 am

    Bump
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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:47 am

    Axel Rover wrote:Skill Name: Potaru Potaru no Mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: Potaru Potaru no Mi is a paramecia-type devil fruit that allows the user to create portals from there body, and these portals are connected to eachother in a way that if an object was thrown into one, it would come out of the other in an instant. The user can create portals in all shapes and sizes, being able to create the perfect-fitting one for the right time. Each portal created has a "face" on one side, and things that go through it and out of come through only that side, so if anything touch the other side, it would either break the portal or bluntly bounce off of it. Each portal is blue, and the "face" side of them has a purple outline.  Also, a person looking closely enough can see from one "face" what is ever beyond the other "face." -add that it takes 2 hits to destroy a portal

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user can travel across long distances by just jumping through one of the portals.

    - The user can defend himself by sending on-coming attacks through another portal.

    - The user in some cases can make more than two portals, allowing for more objects to be teleported at a time.

    - Portals are extra resistant against earth and light-affiliated skills, so it takes twice as much damae to destroy most portals, which is two Lvl.1 hits. -change this to be 4 hits

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A portal can be destroyed if it is attacked on the side that is not the "face." Usually one Lvl.1 slash with a sword, or a really strong Lvl.1 punch is all that is needed to destroy it. A person could also break the portal by striking it on it's edges. People can also grab the edges and move them around.

    - A portal can only have other objects pass through it, they can't go through anything, and the only thing it can really break through is glass. For example, a portal cannot phase through a ship, since there are parts of it that are tangible.

    - The devil fruit makes it so that the user cannot swim, and the user cannot use his powers in the sea.

    - Portals are especially weak to Fire and Darkness type-techniques. While usually it takes an actual attack to break most portals, so much as a touch from fire or darkness-affiliated skills will make the portal dissipate, which is essentially one Lvl.1 hit.

    Lvl 1 Abilities:

    Note: speed of the portals don't apply to PVP.
    Axel Rover
    Axel Rover


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Blood Bane

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    Posts : 42
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Savage Heart Pirates

    Character Profile
    Character Name: Axel Rover
    Primary Skill: Potaru Potaru no Mi (Portal Portal Fruit)
    Secondary Skill: Black Leg Style

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    Post by Axel Rover Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:49 am

    Bumped
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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:52 am

    Approved

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