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    Doku Doku no Mi

    Kairan
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    Post by Kairan Sun Jun 29, 2014 4:25 am

    Skill Name: Doku Doku no Mi (Venom Venom Fruit)
    Skill Type: Paramecia type Devil fruit
    Skill Information: The Doku Doku no Mi is a blue egg shaped devil fruit with hypnotizing swirls of different shades of blue and a black stem. It gives the user the ability to produce and control different types of poisons.
    Skill Strengths:
      The user and produce and control various types of poisons.
      The user is immune to all types of poisons.
      The user can weaken opponents by affecting their senses

    Skill Weaknesses:
      Water, sea stone, haki
      Fire can neutralize liquid poisons
      Some non-organic materials are resistant to the poison


    Abilities Lvl 1:


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    Post by Kairan Mon Jun 30, 2014 10:42 pm

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    Post by Kairan Wed Jul 02, 2014 7:00 pm

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    Rylan the Prodigy
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    Post by Rylan the Prodigy Fri Jul 04, 2014 6:42 am

    Corrections are in red.

    Kairan wrote:Skill Name: Doku Doku no Mi (Venom Venom Fruit)
    Skill Type: Paramecia type Devil fruit
    Skill Information: The Doku Doku no Mi is a blue egg shaped devil fruit with hypnotizing swirls of different shades of blue and a black stem. It gives the user the ability to produce and control different types of poisons.
    Skill Strengths:

      The user and produce and control various types of poisons.


      The user is immune to all types of poisons.


      The user can weaken opponents -"weaken opponents", how can he weaken the opponents? And if so do they lose their stats? If that's the case add how much they lose.

    Skill Weaknesses:

      Water, sea stone, haki


      fire can neutralize liquid poisons


      some non-organic materials are resistant to the poison


    Abilities Lvl 1:
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    Post by Kairan Mon Jul 07, 2014 7:17 pm

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    Post by Kairan Wed Jul 09, 2014 8:24 pm

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    Storm Runner
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    Post by Storm Runner Thu Jul 10, 2014 9:42 am

    corrections in red

    Kairan wrote:Skill Name: Doku Doku no Mi (Venom Venom Fruit)
    Skill Type: Paramecia type Devil fruit
    Skill Information: The Doku Doku no Mi is a blue egg shaped devil fruit with hypnotizing swirls of different shades of blue and a black stem. It gives the user the ability to produce and control different types of poisons.
    Skill Strengths:

      The user and produce and control various types of poisons.


      The user is immune to all types of poisons.


      The user can weaken opponents by affecting their senses

    Skill Weaknesses:

      Water, sea stone, haki


      Fire can neutralize liquid poisons


      Some non-organic materials are resistant to the poison


    Abilities Lvl 1:
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    Post by Kairan Thu Jul 17, 2014 9:38 pm

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    Post by Kairan Thu Jul 17, 2014 9:41 pm

    Corrosive poisons do exist.
    For the poison arrow..it was supposed to be speed not finesse and I was mainly using a description of Magellan's abilities and they say he fires his bullets at high speeds. For the part about how the opponent has a decrease in speed and strength I figured the reason was already in the ability description.
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    Storm Runner
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    Post by Storm Runner Sat Jul 19, 2014 7:34 pm

    Kairan wrote:Corrosive poisons do exist.
    For the poison arrow..it was supposed to be speed not finesse and I was mainly using a description of Magellan's abilities and they say he fires his bullets at high speeds. For the part about how the opponent has a decrease in speed and strength I figured the reason was already in the ability description.
    ^^okay well then I would ask you to list the ph strength of the poison for rank 1, 2 and 3. Also just to let you know Magellan was a logia user and would be a rank 3 if he was on this site.

    Kairan wrote:Skill Name: Doku Doku no Mi (Venom Venom Fruit)
    Skill Type: Paramecia type Devil fruit
    Skill Information: The Doku Doku no Mi is a blue egg shaped devil fruit with hypnotizing swirls of different shades of blue and a black stem. It gives the user the ability to produce and control different types of poisons.
    Skill Strengths:

      The user and produce and control various types of poisons.


      The user is immune to all types of poisons.


      The user can weaken opponents by affecting their senses

    Skill Weaknesses:

      Water, sea stone, haki


      Fire can neutralize liquid poisons
    -how does fire neutralize the poison?

      Some non-organic materials are resistant to the poison
    -can you list a few please.
    ^^Can you please add an elemental strength, remember you are of the darkness element.^^

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    Post by Kairan Tue Jul 22, 2014 10:17 pm

    I will have to change the fire part won't I? I had always assume it evaporated but wouldn't that create fumes instead. Can you explain the element part please? Oh and Magellan would be rank 3 but do I have to be? My ability was based off his but is not completely his.
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    Post by Fisher D. Conrad Thu Aug 07, 2014 6:47 am

    I'm supposed to be taking over now, so I'll review you on the morrow. Just letting you know.
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    Post by Kairan Thu Aug 07, 2014 6:50 am

    Okie dokie
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    Fisher D. Conrad
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    Post by Fisher D. Conrad Thu Aug 07, 2014 10:36 pm

    Kairan wrote:Skill Name: Doku Doku no Mi (Venom Venom Fruit)
    Skill Type: Paramecia type Devil fruit
    Skill Information: The Doku Doku no Mi is a blue egg shaped devil fruit with hypnotizing swirls of different shades of blue and a black stem. It gives the user the ability to produce and control different types of poisons.
    Skill Strengths:

      The user and produce and control various types of poisons.


      The user is immune to all types of poisons.


      The user can weaken opponents by affecting their senses

    Skill Weaknesses:

      Water, sea stone, haki


      Fire can neutralize liquid poisons


      Some non-organic materials are resistant to the poison

    I've never seen such accurate information before. Well, I have, but that doesn't change the accuracy of this information in the slightest. You are missing your elemental strengths and weaknesses, however. Adding those would make this list all the more accurate.

    Accurate wrote:
    Abilities Lvl 1:

    Listing fire as a weaknesses is redundant, since it's already a skill weakness. You're going to need another (assuming you have this as a weakness on all of them, so pretend I've said this for each skill).

    Since it takes a full post to charge, your cooldown could easily pass as 2.

    Keepin' it Cool wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Poison Cloud
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Short Range/5 metre radius
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user creates a poison cloud which engulfs opponents.  
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

      The opponents experience 1st degree burns for 3 posts


      Opponent experiences a decrease in strength by 5 for 2 posts


      Opponent experiences decrease in speed by 5 for 2 posts

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

      The poison cloud only lasts for two posts


      Can be blown away by level 1 skills of the air element


      Also hurts allies

    Can this cloud explode if hit by fire? That could be something worth listing as either or both a strength and a weakness.

    Tasty wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Poison Barrier
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support/Defense
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user produces large amounts of liquid poison from the body which the user manipulates to surround them. It is seven feet high.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

      The opponent will lose their strength by 5 for 3  posts


      Level 1 non-haki based weapons will corrode


      Barrier completely surrounds user quickly


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

      Weak against weapons embedded with haki


      Vulnerable to fire


      User loses endurance by 5 for 3 posts

    There should be some reason why they lose strength. At least make it so they have to touch them.

    I'm also gathering this doesn't actually protect you from damage, but just hurts people for hurting you. Is that right?

    Nom wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Poison Armour
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support/Defense
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user produces liquid poison from the body which is manipulated to cover the user's body.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

      Causes 1st degree burns when touched which lasts for 2 posts


      Level 1 non haki-based weapons will corrode


      Armour forms quickly

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

      Fire neutralizes the ability of the armour


      The user is unable to use another skill while this ability is active


      Weak against weapons embedded with haki, sea stone, salt

    What's this actually do? Because it seems pretty much the same as the last one. The Devil Fruit weaknesses are also redundant, same as the fire mentioned previously.

    Don't be That Guy wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Poison Arrow
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Middle Range/20 metre radius
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user creases an arrow made of poison by blowing the arrows from their mouth. The arrows are fired at high speed and when it hits opponents it affects their nervous system
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

      Speed increases by 5 for user for 2 posts


      Opponents experience a decrease in speed by 5 for 2 posts


      The arrow will cause a decrease in strength by 5 for 2 posts

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

      Arrow can be blocked by shield of haki, sea-stone, salt, water


      Arrow can be blocked by shield of fire


      User can only fire 5 arrows at a time


    The number of arrows isn't really a weakness. That's more of a strength.

    Redundant weaknesses are redundant.

    Genuine weaknesses are vastly outnumbered by strengths. You gain stats and the opponent loses a bunch. Needs to be evened out.
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    Post by Kairan Sat Aug 16, 2014 1:42 am

    Sorry for the late reply and thanks for the review. I don't suppose you could suggest an elemental strength and weakness for me please. The difference between the barrier and armour id that barrier can be used for someone else. Hmm yup I really need some better weaknesses.
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    Fisher D. Conrad
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    Post by Fisher D. Conrad Sat Aug 16, 2014 1:44 am

    Elemental weaknesses are listed on the element chart. It's in the rules area.
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