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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

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We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Edward D. Valentine
    Edward D. Valentine


    Rank 1- Limited Edition Donor 2- Player-

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    Race : Human
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    Crew : Black Orchid Pirates
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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Edward D. Valentine
    Primary Skill: Flower Reaper Style
    Secondary Skill: The Yawning Sage

    Rainbow Petal Kimono Empty Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Post by Edward D. Valentine Sat Mar 08, 2014 9:14 am

    Equipment Name:  Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Equipment Level:1

    Equipment Type: Kimono

    Equipment Description:
    This is a cherry, red kimono shaded with a navy blue over the shoulders. The silk robe is painted half way to the bottom and down is a consort of rainbow petals that stretch the around the entire kimono. It is unique in it design with one sleeve normal length and the other sewed off in half for combat purposes.

    Equipment Significance:
    The owner holds this item special to his heart. It was his sensi’s Kimono that he wore into battle in his prime. He was given it as a farewell gift when he was banished from Wano. The only thing he has of his old life and old master.

    Equipment Strength:

    - It was crafted so elegantly that it weighs next to nothing

    - The silk is weaved together so well that it keeps the user warm in the cold climates 

    - Blunt objects will not damage the Kimono

    Equipment Weaknesses:

    - Sharp weapons can still cut the kimono

    - The Kimono burns easily

    - The Kimono is only for a show, therefore, it can't block any attacks.


    Last edited by Edward D. Valentine on Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:22 am; edited 2 times in total
    Leon L.H.
    Leon L.H.


    Administrator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 275283
    Task Points : 16
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    Posts : 520
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Hexel L Hellsing AKA The Red Piano
    Primary Skill: Akuma-Akuma No Mi; Model: Diablo
    Secondary Skill: Vengeance of Demon Slayers

    Rainbow Petal Kimono Empty Re: Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Post by Leon L.H. Sat Mar 08, 2014 9:35 pm

    Corrections will be in red.

    Edward D. Valentine wrote:Equipment Name:  Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Equipment Level:1

    Equipment Type: Kimono

    Equipment Description:
    This is a cherry, red kimono shaded with a navy blue over the shoulders. The silk robe is painted half way to the bottom and down is a consort of rainbow petals that stretch the around the entire kimono. It is unique in it design with one sleeve normal length and the other sewed off in half for combat purposes.

    Equipment Significance:
    The owner holds this item special to his heart. It was his sensi’s Kimono that he wore into battle in his prime. He was given it as a farewell gift when he was banished from Wano. The only thing he has of his old life and old master.

    Equipment Strength:

    - It was crafted so elegantly that it weighs next to nothing

    - The silk is weaved together so well that it isolates from the coldest temperatures for long periods of time. - reword this to, it's thick enough to keep you warm.

    - Blunt objects will not damage the Kimono

    Equipment Weaknesses:

    - Sharp weapons can still cut the jacket and tear it - reword it to sharp weapons can cut the kimono and tear it.

    - Frost Damage still hits the user for less force - denied. this is more like lvl 2 or 3 equipment. keep in mind your kimono is lvl 1, a normal kimono i can buy at the shop.

    - Blunt objects still hit user with full force. - reword this to "Kimono is only for a show, therefore, it can't block any attacks.


    Leon L.H.
    Leon L.H.


    Administrator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 275283
    Task Points : 16
    Divine Coins :
    Posts : 520
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Hexel L Hellsing AKA The Red Piano
    Primary Skill: Akuma-Akuma No Mi; Model: Diablo
    Secondary Skill: Vengeance of Demon Slayers

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    Post by Leon L.H. Sat Mar 08, 2014 10:17 pm

    Edward D. Valentine wrote:Equipment Name:  Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Equipment Level:1

    Equipment Type: Kimono

    Equipment Description:
    This is a cherry, red kimono shaded with a navy blue over the shoulders. The silk robe is painted half way to the bottom and down is a consort of rainbow petals that stretch the around the entire kimono. It is unique in it design with one sleeve normal length and the other sewed off in half for combat purposes.

    Equipment Significance:
    The owner holds this item special to his heart. It was his sensi’s Kimono that he wore into battle in his prime. He was given it as a farewell gift when he was banished from Wano. The only thing he has of his old life and old master.

    Equipment Strength:

    - It was crafted so elegantly that it weighs next to nothing

    - The silk is weaved together so well that it keeps the user warm in the coldest climates - no not coldest...just cold. "keeps the user warm in cold weather."

    - Blunt objects will not damage the Kimono

    Equipment Weaknesses:

    - Sharp weapons can still cut the kimono

    - Frost Damage still hits the user for full force - you can't say you get full hit from frost damage when your kimono doesn't do anything in first place other than it keeps you warm. Change it

    - The Kimono is only for a show, therefore, it can't block any attacks. - take the color out on here..i don't know why you changed it to black in color lettering.
    Leon L.H.
    Leon L.H.


    Administrator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 275283
    Task Points : 16
    Divine Coins :
    Posts : 520
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Hexel L Hellsing AKA The Red Piano
    Primary Skill: Akuma-Akuma No Mi; Model: Diablo
    Secondary Skill: Vengeance of Demon Slayers

    Rainbow Petal Kimono Empty Re: Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Post by Leon L.H. Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:24 am

    Approved

    Edward D. Valentine wrote:Equipment Name:  Rainbow Petal Kimono

    Equipment Level:1

    Equipment Type: Kimono

    Equipment Description:
    This is a cherry, red kimono shaded with a navy blue over the shoulders. The silk robe is painted half way to the bottom and down is a consort of rainbow petals that stretch the around the entire kimono. It is unique in it design with one sleeve normal length and the other sewed off in half for combat purposes.

    Equipment Significance:
    The owner holds this item special to his heart. It was his sensi’s Kimono that he wore into battle in his prime. He was given it as a farewell gift when he was banished from Wano. The only thing he has of his old life and old master.

    Equipment Strength:

    - It was crafted so elegantly that it weighs next to nothing

    - The silk is weaved together so well that it keeps the user warm in the cold climates 

    - Blunt objects will not damage the Kimono

    Equipment Weaknesses:

    - Sharp weapons can still cut the kimono

    - The Kimono burns easily

    - The Kimono is only for a show, therefore, it can't block any attacks.

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